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Sat Dec 13, 2008 2:00 am
Rascalover says...



Hey

can you pretty please be as harsh as you need to be with my piece of course if you review it?????

topic40060.html

thnkx

Tiff
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Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html





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Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:07 am
LoveableLittleSock says...



Anti-pop, finished yours! Took me like, 2 hours?
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Sun Dec 21, 2008 5:36 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



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I've got quite a few reviews on it already. And I'm so thankful to those that have reviewed it I'm just looking for a few more opinions before I revise it. I'm aware that there's a lot of mistakes, I'm just looking for some overall opinions
Thanks so much
-Kirsten xxx
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Tue Dec 30, 2008 1:33 am
Angels-Symphony says...



REMINDER: you asked me to put a reminder, and I hope I did it correctly xD
topic40958.html
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Tue Dec 30, 2008 7:38 pm
Angels-Symphony says...



Two more things in desparate need of a review. An attempt at poetry and a chapter in my novel in desperate need of reviewing.

Poem: post478157.html#478157

Novel Beginning: topic40957.html
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Tue Dec 30, 2008 8:49 pm
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silverSUNLIGHTx says...



Hi, want to review my piece, because I really want to know if it sucks eggs... or not. :]
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--->Don't forget we've got unfinished business. Stories yet to unfold, tales that must be retold.
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Wed Dec 31, 2008 7:08 am
Angels-Symphony says...



Please review this! I'd like to know what you think of it.

post478157.html#478157

Tear it apart, and break it down!

Always Inspired,
Shina
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.





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Fri Jan 02, 2009 2:07 pm
lakegirls says...



Hi,
I'm entering my story in a contest so it needs to be top notch. It is an excerpt from a novel, so things are going a bit slow. If you could do it by January 5th I would be on top of the world. If you can't though, I understand.

topic41186.html

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N
Writing is the only thing that, when I do it, I don't feel I should be doing something else.
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Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:14 pm
LoveableLittleSock says...



Angel, please, one request at a time =] Thanks.
I'll get to all your pieces soon! Sorry I haven't gotten to them yet. Been busy.
Thanks fer understandin'
~*Sara*~
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Tue Mar 10, 2009 3:43 am
LoveableLittleSock says...



I do still have reviews I owe, but nevertheless, everybody's free to request again. I haven't received any requests in a while, and I'll be more than happy to review everybody's works. I'm a lil' rusty =]
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Tue Jun 09, 2009 5:31 am
asxz says...



Hi! I would like you to review my story. It's chapter four in a book that I am writing, but at the begining of the first part there is a quick brief over what has happened so far. I really want a harsh critique, so rip it to shreads; PLEASE!

Link: Part ONE:
Part TWO:
Thank you so much!
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Wed Jun 07, 2023 7:02 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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