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Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:47 am
*DaughteroftheMoon* says...



There are guidelines of course.

I WILL REVIEW:

Poetry
Fantasy Fiction
Romance Fiction
Science Fiction
Historic Fiction
Other Fiction
Adventure/Action Fiction
Art and Photography

WILL NOT REVIEW:

Lyrics/Songs
Horror Stories
Stories with excessive foul language, or sex scenes.
Non-Fiction

The reason? Well, I don't know much about lyrics and it wouldn't be fair on your part. Horror stories give me nightmares and I'm often home alone.
*I can waiver on Non-Fiction, giving on what it is about. I just don't want to be stuck with essays if you know what I mean.

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~Alyss
Last edited by *DaughteroftheMoon* on Fri Feb 06, 2009 10:02 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Sun Jan 11, 2009 6:00 pm
*DaughteroftheMoon* says...



Someone out there has to want reviews...
Last edited by *DaughteroftheMoon* on Sun Jan 11, 2009 7:39 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sun Jan 11, 2009 6:28 pm
Demeter says...



Hi, Alyss!

Here's a poem of mine. It's had several versions, and no one hasn't reviewed it after my last edit.

topic39090.html

(I'm going to submit it for the Lit Journal, so please – kill it, rip it, chew it, and spit on the bones. :D)

Thank you!


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Sun Jan 11, 2009 7:38 pm
*DaughteroftheMoon* says...



Thanks for the material, you have a review waiting for you on your poem!
So anyone else??
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Wed Jan 28, 2009 10:48 pm
KailaMarie says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36932.html

I'd love a review on this please! It's... uh, I guess it's romantic fiction. I think I put it in other, though. Well, either way. Thank you. (:
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Wed Jan 28, 2009 10:50 pm
RGallagher says...



Can you review this for me?

Title: Top Secret
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: topic42021.html

Thanks!
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topic42126.html





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Fri Feb 06, 2009 9:59 pm
*DaughteroftheMoon* says...



KailaMarie, your review is done. Sorry for the wait. My computer crashed, cause a virus got it. So, I'm moving on to RGallagher. Keep the reviews coming!!
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Fri Feb 06, 2009 10:33 pm
*DaughteroftheMoon* says...



Finished with all the reviews! Please feed me more. :)
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Fri Feb 06, 2009 10:34 pm
Night Mistress says...



topic43297.html

it's the second chapter, so might have read the prolouge and chapter one to understand.
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Sun Feb 08, 2009 11:56 pm
*DaughteroftheMoon* says...



Ok, I'll get it right now. Anyone else, anyone?
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Mon Feb 09, 2009 12:12 am
*DaughteroftheMoon* says...



Just got done with Poison Love. So anyone else?
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 4:59 am
Maki-Chan says...



How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!



Well.. It is somewhat horror, but not really. I guess. You could take a look and if you don't wanna than that's ok ^_^
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Tue Mar 17, 2009 3:32 pm
Theodorable says...



Here's my new chapter in my story.

topic45122.html
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Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:44 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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