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Fri Aug 22, 2008 1:53 am
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romance otaku says...



romance otaku wrote:i have one. its adventure romance, but this chapter does NOT have any romance. the link is in my sig

thx


chapter two is now up. like usual, the link is in my sig.

thx again
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Fri Aug 22, 2008 10:26 pm
Livinginfantasy says...



I'd like you to review something of mine!

Bored

Please, with sugar lumps on top? :D





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Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:37 pm
andimlovegalore says...



XxxDo - I've done your first chapter ^^ as you know, and I'm going onto the second one soon.

Romance & Gladius - I'm in the middle of yours now.


Fantasy - I'll do yours soon! It's a poem so it won't take me as long.





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Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:29 am
andimlovegalore says...



Romance! Your review for chapter one is finished ^__^





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Wed Sep 03, 2008 11:21 am
fun4eva says...



hiii
I know you said till septber 1st but if you get the time, would you mind taking a look at this piece?

topic34301.html (action/adventure)

Thanks!





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Sat Sep 06, 2008 6:31 pm
Gadi. says...



Hey!
Me gustado un critique para la poema [url="http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post421834.html#421834"]We're thinking about you[/url].

:) Gracias!!!
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:20 pm
romance otaku says...



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could you pls review this? i think you did my original edit, but you will like this one a lot more. a ton of differences. pls tell me how well i did
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Thu Sep 18, 2008 10:53 pm
OverEasy says...



Hola!!

topic36165.html

Purty please? and thanks a million :D

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Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:59 am
Jon says...



topic36191.html

Please?


Thankyou!


*wll give points when finished*


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Wed Oct 29, 2008 5:44 pm
scribblingquill says...



=D

*takes advantage of snazzy offer*

I will have a look at your stuff ^^

I'd really like some good crit on my recent poetry,

choose from:



Like Stars topic37790.html

This Poem Is Me topic37878.html

**I Want my Fingers Knotted** topic38002.html

Pavement Fields topic35243.html



i appreciate it sincerely ^_^


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Tue Nov 11, 2008 4:55 pm
Reuben A says...



Here! My signature has the link.
So stadig loop ons deur die pers Jakarandas wat val,die bome word kaal Pa staar na die beeld van Botha wat reis op sy perd,Hy wonder was bloed soveel werd.Soveel jare dra hy aan die naam van 'n plek,Soveel jare moet ons nou laat gaan,Is die naam dan so erg,so bitter en sleg?Hoekom gooi jul dit weg?





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