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ChieTheWriter
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Wed Aug 03, 2016 1:03 am
ChieTheWriter says... · Wed Aug 03, 2016 1:03 am
Would you be against reviewing a fanfic?
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Ejay1806
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Rascalover
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Mon Aug 08, 2016 7:39 pm
Rascalover says... · Mon Aug 08, 2016 7:39 pm
AnnGrace wrote:Would you be against reviewing a fanfic?


nope! I actually base all of my writing off of my own fanfics so I get it :)
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Rascalover
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Mon Aug 08, 2016 7:47 pm
Rascalover says... · Mon Aug 08, 2016 7:47 pm
Ejay1806 wrote:https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=130742
Review please !!! :)


Finished :)
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Rascalover
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Wed Mar 14, 2018 12:34 am
Rascalover says... · Wed Mar 14, 2018 12:34 am
Anybody out there looking for some reviews??
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MrPhox
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Wed Mar 21, 2018 1:34 pm
MrPhox says... · Wed Mar 21, 2018 1:34 pm
Well maybe. I have a story and I would like some critics, comment, anything.

Well it need some reviewing since I have not made all the change, there are no chapter and its 44 pages long.




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Nobunaga
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Wed Mar 21, 2018 8:28 pm
Nobunaga says... · Wed Mar 21, 2018 8:28 pm
I'll take one! :D
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Daenyss
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Thu Mar 22, 2018 12:46 am
Daenyss says... · Thu Mar 22, 2018 12:46 am
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Daenyss/Since-Infinity-Chapter-1-139920

Will you please review this piece? The next two chapters are also published if you feel like giving them a review.
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Rascalover
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Thu Mar 22, 2018 2:42 am
Rascalover says... · Thu Mar 22, 2018 2:42 am
Daenyss wrote:https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Daenyss/Since-Infinity-Chapter-1-139920

Will you please review this piece? The next two chapters are also published if you feel like giving them a review.


Working on it!
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Rascalover
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Thu Mar 22, 2018 2:42 am
Rascalover says... · Thu Mar 22, 2018 2:42 am
Nobunaga wrote:I'll take one! :D


I'll take a peek at some! :D
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Rascalover
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Thu Mar 22, 2018 2:42 am
Rascalover says... · Thu Mar 22, 2018 2:42 am
MrPhox wrote:Well maybe. I have a story and I would like some critics, comment, anything.

Well it need some reviewing since I have not made all the change, there are no chapter and its 44 pages long.



Is it on the site some where?
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manilla
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Tue Mar 27, 2018 6:39 pm
manilla says... · Tue Mar 27, 2018 6:39 pm
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aulyasela3597
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Thu Jun 21, 2018 11:57 pm
aulyasela3597 says... · Thu Jun 21, 2018 11:57 pm
Hello everyone! I would love a review on my first essay >> Comparisons Between The Education System in Australia and Indonesia

If you guys have time :)




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aulyasela3597
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Sat Jun 23, 2018 10:23 pm
aulyasela3597 says... · Sat Jun 23, 2018 10:23 pm
Hello, guys! :)

Would you like to see my recent work? >> Indonesian Ghost Mythology

Don't hesitate to give your constructive criticism, opinion and advice :) I'll reply as soon as possible :D

Warm regards,

Aulyasela3597




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Swetachowdhury0
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Thu Jul 26, 2018 7:50 am
Swetachowdhury0 says... · Thu Jul 26, 2018 7:50 am
hiiiii dear, can you please review my story..



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