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The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.




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I'm writing a new story and need reviews for it so far/
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Hey guys! Looking to do some reviewing since I now work on third shift! :)

Bring on the request! :twisted: :D
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please review "Hurt" and "Pain pain" by me!! Thanks :)




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PoTatOe001 wrote:please review "Hurt" and "Pain pain" by me!! Thanks :)

Hey can you reply with a link to these works, and I would love too!
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GodfreysBouillon wrote:People like you are awesome, just accepting review requests. It helps a lot of people.
I have one of my own, a historical fiction piece set in the New World, 1520.

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I am glad you think i am awesome. i will start reading your piece of work tonight, but it may take some time to actually get the review done :)
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Done and Done.

Anyone else need a review?? lol I do, but I can't review my own work objectively, so if I give you a review feel free to go to my work and review some of it if it interests you.
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Hi Rascalover !

I'd really appreciate it if you could review my short story — The Absurdity of hope
its final draft will possibly be an entry for a contest, and I'd be glad if you could comment on if the premise is relevant to the prompt (which is included at the end.) otherwise I'll write another one.

Thanks a lot and I did see that you wanted a review on some works of yours so I will drop a review on them in the coming days if needed.
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I'll definitely get to this today to tomorrow and I would great appreciate it if you could review The unfinished diary of TBJ 🙂
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Traves wrote:Hi Rascalover !

I'd really appreciate it if you could review my short story — The Absurdity of hope
its final draft will possibly be an entry for a contest, and I'd be glad if you could comment on if the premise is relevant to the prompt (which is included at the end.) otherwise I'll write another one.

Thanks a lot and I did see that you wanted a review on some works of yours so I will drop a review on them in the coming days if needed.



Done :)
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Hi Rascalover!!

Could you pls review this slam poem on Gay Love ?? :)
Honey and Sunshine

Shall always be ready to help you in any form!!

Thank you so much!!
Last edited by Aranya on Sun Dec 23, 2018 9:17 am, edited 1 time in total.




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Hi Rascalover

Could you pls review my slam poem on gay love?

Honey and Sunshine

Pls help me it's for a competition.

Thank you so much



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