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[color=#80FF40]Hey, please fill free to check this out. I would be thrilled to have a review on it! :smt003

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Waka waka & thank you,
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Hey Meg. Would you be available to review my edited chapter 1( link: What Could Not Be (Chapter 1) *EDITED*). It would be great if you could just to see if ive made a big improvement from the original.




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I would love it if you could review my revised chapter 1 of my novel!
The Shifties Chapter 1 - Found - REVISED
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Hey~ Are you alright reviewing something 18+?

I have a multi-part short story that I'd like reviewed ^~^ I'd definitely like the second part done, but if you aren't too busy could you also do the first one?

My Place or Yours? [Part 1]
My Place or Yours? [Part 2]
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I'm cool with 18+. I'll get to it as soon as I can.
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Awesome~ Thank you!
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If you have the time, would you mind taking a look at Monachopsis?




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@NerdBird done
I'm still in love with The Shifties. If you're looking for a baby novel that's just started, I would suggest this one.
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@queerelves done.
I highly suggest this if you're looking for a read that focuses on characters. (the 18+ rating is warranted though, just saying)
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@windrattlestheblinds is done~
It's a great read if you're looking for a Wonderland story. I highly recommend it.
Who's next?
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Hey! Would you be able to review this? I need to send it into a prof for my portfolio.

The Good Life - Prologue: This is Not a Game of Russian Roulette

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-Nicole
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@lakegirls finished~
Who's next? :3
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