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Could you please review this?

Boy Who Cried Wolf
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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can you review the first chapter of my novel?
I would really appreciate it!

To The Stars Above (chapter 1)
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.




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Hey, could you please review my novel The Progeny? Here's the link to the prologue: The Progeny (Prologue)

I'd love it if you'd read it all and review each chapter and discuss how the story is progressing etc. but it is already quite long and only a third of it is up at the moment so I understand if you don't want to. If you only have time to read a chapter or two, could you focus on the latest chapters? They have the least reviews.

If you want me to review anything in return, let me know :D




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Umm... Do you still need stuff to review? If so... https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=121265

Thank Thank Thank You! :D
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Hi, I would like it if you can review thishttps://www.youngwriterssociety.com ... ted-121091 , It is quiet short :) any advice would really be apprciated




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Last edited by fight4whatisright on Fri Sep 18, 2015 5:12 am, edited 1 time in total.




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@beans is done (until he posts his next chapter) after a very long, patient wait
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The Stolen Bride

It's a short story I have posted today.

Thanks a lot if you're able to review it.

If not, I understand. :)

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@psudiname is finished after a long while ;n; I know I'm slow, guys
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Hey megsug, do you think you could review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 7

Thank you in advance !



Men occasionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry off as if nothing had happened.
— Winston Churchill