Could you be awesome and check out the latest/fourth chapter my my novel for me? Copying and pasting isn't working on my laptop for whatever reason, but I've posted the link on my wall so you can get to it via there if ya like.
Also, I'm not sure if you've read the second and third chapters, but either way don't worry about reviewing those ones!
I've noticed some of your reviews on pieces of work and they look awesome and incredibly helpful! Would really appreciate it if you could find the time to review this:
I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin. — David Eddings