Romantic fiction. A couple of days ago, someone in chat had a writing assignment with the prompt "Write a story about a bride left at the alter, a match, and a storm," and she couldn't think of any ideas. I gave her a really good one, but she didn't take it, so I wrote it instead. It's the first story I've finished in a LONG time, and I'm pretty proud of it. Tear it up.
Hi! :) I would definitely appreciate a review on my novel: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=1206 It's only two chapters, but you can review as much of it as your heart desires. :) If you could focus mostly on pacing and character development, then that would be very helpful! Thanks so much!
-RayHutch <3
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It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small. — Neil Armstrong
