Pretty Please Give Me Things to Review

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dogs
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Mon Feb 11, 2013 9:03 pm
dogs says... · Mon Feb 11, 2013 9:03 pm
Heyo, could you do me a huge favor and give me a review on my short story here? I'm not that good at writing short stories and I want to improve that aspect of my writing. Here it is: work.php?id=99722

Thanks! You're the greatest :)

TuckEr EllsworTh :smt032
Be a cool kid and do my Short Story Contest! viewtopic.php?f=404&t=97148&p=1122883#p1122883

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Animal
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megsug
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Sat Mar 09, 2013 3:53 am
megsug says... · Sat Mar 09, 2013 3:53 am
Sorry for not reviewing... at all in far too long. I've been busy. However, Birkoff is done.
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megsug
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Tue Mar 26, 2013 12:41 am
megsug says... · Tue Mar 26, 2013 12:41 am
I forgot to say that Kahzy's done.
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housecat
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 8:18 pm
housecat says... · Sun Apr 07, 2013 8:18 pm
This is a short story. I love nit-picking! It really helps.

work.php?id=100736




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rachaelwillson1
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Tue Apr 09, 2013 1:50 pm
rachaelwillson1 says... · Tue Apr 09, 2013 1:50 pm
Pretty please can you review my work? I'd really appreciate it! :)

work.php?id=100823




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chandowd
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Wed Apr 10, 2013 12:37 pm
chandowd says... · Wed Apr 10, 2013 12:37 pm
can you please review this? work.php?id=100845




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megsug
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Thu Apr 11, 2013 8:38 pm
megsug says... · Thu Apr 11, 2013 8:38 pm
Mari has been done for a while... I apologize for how long it's taking again.
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Incandenza
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Fri Apr 12, 2013 6:08 am
Incandenza says... · Fri Apr 12, 2013 6:08 am
Hi megsug,

could you review this for me please?

work.php?id=100892

thanks
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tragicHearts
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Fri Apr 19, 2013 12:00 am
tragicHearts says... · Fri Apr 19, 2013 12:00 am
If you get a chance would appreciate a review for the first part of chapter one of my novel.

work.php?id=101049

also willing to review something for you if you want. :D




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megsug
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Thu Aug 01, 2013 7:24 pm
megsug says... · Thu Aug 01, 2013 7:24 pm
Alright, I'm all caught up now. I know it's been a while since I posted, but I wanted to get entirely done with all the reviews I needed to do, before more requests came in.
Life has slowed down some, so my reviews should be timely.
Thanks. Megs~
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ShortBus
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Tue Dec 03, 2013 11:29 pm
ShortBus says... · Tue Dec 03, 2013 11:29 pm
You really must like reviewing. ☺

Try this one.

Quest Unable Chapter One (Rough Draft)




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megsug
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Sun Dec 29, 2013 10:45 pm
megsug says... · Sun Dec 29, 2013 10:45 pm
Done with ShortBus~ For some reason I don't remember getting notified about a post in my WRFF o.o
Anyways~ Anyone else?
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Twit
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Fri Jan 03, 2014 6:50 pm
Twit says... · Fri Jan 03, 2014 6:50 pm
Hi!

Be very grateful if you'd vomit criticism all over this: Grey Heart - 1
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