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DarknecrosisX
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Sat Nov 17, 2012 8:17 pm
DarknecrosisX says... · Sat Nov 17, 2012 8:17 pm
Sorry guys, I'm not accepting any requests until the 26th of November. Blame the mock exams for that.

Sorry for any inconvenience.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.




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DarknecrosisX
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Wed Nov 21, 2012 3:52 pm
DarknecrosisX says... · Wed Nov 21, 2012 3:52 pm
Back up for business! Exams were moved to December, so keep your requests coming in!
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.




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Hecate
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Wed Nov 21, 2012 4:39 pm
Hecate says... · Wed Nov 21, 2012 4:39 pm
Hey! Then I'd be eternally grateful if you can do the one I requested right before you announced your break :P I am desperate for as much feedback as possible from any source.




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DarknecrosisX
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Wed Nov 21, 2012 7:49 pm
DarknecrosisX says... · Wed Nov 21, 2012 7:49 pm
Done. It was fantastic. :)

FEED ME MORE :smt003
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.




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nomadpenguin
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Sat Nov 24, 2012 4:28 am
nomadpenguin says... · Sat Nov 24, 2012 4:28 am
I had hoped that I'd get more reviews for this so...please?
work.php?id=98022
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DarknecrosisX
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Sat Nov 24, 2012 7:42 am
DarknecrosisX says... · Sat Nov 24, 2012 7:42 am
Can do.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.




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Clarity
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Sun Dec 02, 2012 6:02 pm
Clarity says... · Sun Dec 02, 2012 6:02 pm
work.php?id=98150 it's not finished yet... and I need a title. Thanks for any help you give :)
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FlorenceLedger
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Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:09 pm
FlorenceLedger says... · Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:09 pm
I'd really love if you could review the first chapter of my novel, Black as White found here: work.php?id=98145

It's a dark, magic realism novel with a complex story. At least, I like to think it is.

Thanks.




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Omni
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Fri Dec 07, 2012 3:49 am
Omni says... · Fri Dec 07, 2012 3:49 am
Hey, I'm wondering if you could review this preview from my first chapter... Ignore the paragraph problem please.

work.php?id=97564

If you want to read more, just PM me and I'll send you it, that works fine for me... Thanks :D

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Pencil2paper
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Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:22 pm
Pencil2paper says... · Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:22 pm
Hey. I was just wondering if you could review my latest work. It's a horror poem, if that makes any sense.

Here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=98219

Just wanted to know what you think. Thanks!
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indieeloise
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Wed Dec 19, 2012 8:43 pm
indieeloise says... · Wed Dec 19, 2012 8:43 pm
I am planning on sending this in the form of a condolence letter to the families of those involved in the Sandy Hook incident, so it's really important to me to be as perfect as possible... I would really love a nitpicky review, and feel free to be as harsh as possible! work.php?id=98404
Thank you!
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mnkeygrl11
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Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:53 pm
mnkeygrl11 says... · Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:53 pm
Hi! I'm working on a fantasy novel right now, and I was wondering if you could review the first page and 1/2 or so before I continue with the chapter? Thanks!

http://mnkeygrl11.writerfeedpad.com/2




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DarknecrosisX
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Wed Jan 09, 2013 1:48 pm
DarknecrosisX says... · Wed Jan 09, 2013 1:48 pm
I can't review that- I'm not on writerfeedpad. Still accepting requests, though.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.




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PurpleMoment
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 6:58 pm
PurpleMoment says... · Wed Jan 23, 2013 6:58 pm
I would love to have someone review this. The formatting screwed up. But the content is all there. I would love your honest thoughts, responses, feelings, emotions, questions, and anything you have to say.

work.php?id=99270

Thank you!

All my other work is poetry. This work is the only Essay piece that I have written.

Feel free to check out my other works.

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