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Hey DNX,

Just made another poem and was hoping you could 'tear it to pieces' as you say :P

work.php?id=99791

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WartyFingleBlaster
The best part of writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon.




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Hello,

Could you please review my poem that I'm entering for a contest?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99689
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

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Daddy Long Legs are more closely related to crabs than spiders and somehow the idea of crablike creatures with spider legs that have escaped the entrappings of the primordial sea and now crawl over land and can walk up and down walls and ceilings creeps me more than I can adequately describe.
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