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DarknecrosisX · 2012-10-28T23:36:43Z

Welcome to DNX’s official review thread, where I can guarantee you a quality review for any work you post. Keep in mind, however that I am only human, and the laws of time also apply to myself, but I will get your piece done as soon as I can. First off, just a few ground rules about what I DO NOT accept. 1. I will not review offensive or trashy works; they are a waste of time. 2. If you deem my review to be overly critical (which I will try not to do) just tell me and I shall apologise; DO NOT aggravate me. 3. Don’t badger me. I will get it done, trust me. 4. Don’t request more than one review every week, other people need reviews too! 5. Make sure you keep up with my posts on this thread before requested a review, some weeks I may be slightly busier than others. To keep myself organised, here is the order of pieces I’m reviewing at this moment in time: - - - - - - I will prioritise pieces that currently have no reviews, because it’s unfair when somebody writes a great work and it isn’t appreciated. Then, I will attempt to mark off the larger writings first (that’s novel chapters and lengthy short-stories), followed by the shorter stuff like poetry and miscellaneous. The following genres are those which I can deliver the best quality reviews for: Horror Stories I love tense, terrifying stories, and although I’m very hard to scare, I can appreciate a fantastic horror piece. I will prioritise this genre over others because it is my favourite, so you can expect a detailed and quality review from me if you need one! ’Swords and Sorcery’ Fantasy This is, basically, fantasy that isn’t sugar-coated: violence, war, death and mature characters are main conventions in this sub-genre. I greatly enjoy these style pieces, so if you need a review under this category, feel free to request! Realistic Poetry Poetry that deals with deep issues and the reality that we face in the modern world: no soppy romance or depressing emotional torture, just straight-talking themes that we see in the everyday world. Comedy I love a good laugh, and YWS hasn’t got enough humour, so it’s a win-win! I’d love to review any funny pieces, whether they contain dry or tongue-in-cheek comedy, but no trashy works; they just aren’t funny. That’s about it, although there are somethings that I don’t particularly enjoy reviewing, they’re barely worth mentioning, so request away, I look forward to seeing everyone’s stuff! Regards DNX

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Sat Nov 17, 2012 8:17 pm

DarknecrosisX says... · Sat Nov 17, 2012 8:17 pm

Sorry guys, I'm not accepting any requests until the 26th of November. Blame the mock exams for that.

Sorry for any inconvenience.

Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.

DarknecrosisX

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Wed Nov 21, 2012 3:52 pm

DarknecrosisX says... · Wed Nov 21, 2012 3:52 pm

Back up for business! Exams were moved to December, so keep your requests coming in!

Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.

Hecate

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Wed Nov 21, 2012 4:39 pm

Hecate says... · Wed Nov 21, 2012 4:39 pm

Hey! Then I'd be eternally grateful if you can do the one I requested right before you announced your break

I am desperate for as much feedback as possible from any source.

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Wed Nov 21, 2012 7:49 pm

DarknecrosisX says... · Wed Nov 21, 2012 7:49 pm

Done. It was fantastic.

FEED ME MORE :smt003

Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.

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Sat Nov 24, 2012 4:28 am

nomadpenguin says... · Sat Nov 24, 2012 4:28 am

I had hoped that I'd get more reviews for this so...please?
work.php?id=98022

I’m being ironic. Don't interrupt a man in the midst of being ironic, it’s not polite.

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Sat Nov 24, 2012 7:42 am

DarknecrosisX says... · Sat Nov 24, 2012 7:42 am

Can do.

Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.

Clarity

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Sun Dec 02, 2012 6:02 pm

Clarity says... · Sun Dec 02, 2012 6:02 pm

work.php?id=98150 it's not finished yet... and I need a title. Thanks for any help you give

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FlorenceLedger

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Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:09 pm

FlorenceLedger says... · Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:09 pm

I'd really love if you could review the first chapter of my novel, Black as White found here: work.php?id=98145

It's a dark, magic realism novel with a complex story. At least, I like to think it is.

Thanks.

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Fri Dec 07, 2012 3:49 am

Omni says... · Fri Dec 07, 2012 3:49 am

Hey, I'm wondering if you could review this preview from my first chapter... Ignore the paragraph problem please.

work.php?id=97564

If you want to read more, just PM me and I'll send you it, that works fine for me... Thanks

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ela00051u

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Mon Dec 10, 2012 8:32 am

ela00051u says... · Mon Dec 10, 2012 8:32 am

nice one

Pencil2paper

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Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:22 pm

Pencil2paper says... · Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:22 pm

Hey. I was just wondering if you could review my latest work. It's a horror poem, if that makes any sense.

Here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=98219

Just wanted to know what you think. Thanks!

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Wed Dec 19, 2012 8:43 pm

indieeloise says... · Wed Dec 19, 2012 8:43 pm

I am planning on sending this in the form of a condolence letter to the families of those involved in the Sandy Hook incident, so it's really important to me to be as perfect as possible... I would really love a nitpicky review, and feel free to be as harsh as possible! work.php?id=98404
Thank you!

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mnkeygrl11

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Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:53 pm

mnkeygrl11 says... · Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:53 pm

Hi! I'm working on a fantasy novel right now, and I was wondering if you could review the first page and 1/2 or so before I continue with the chapter? Thanks!

http://mnkeygrl11.writerfeedpad.com/2

DarknecrosisX

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Wed Jan 09, 2013 1:48 pm

DarknecrosisX says... · Wed Jan 09, 2013 1:48 pm

I can't review that- I'm not on writerfeedpad. Still accepting requests, though.

Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.

PurpleMoment

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Wed Jan 23, 2013 6:58 pm

PurpleMoment says... · Wed Jan 23, 2013 6:58 pm

I would love to have someone review this. The formatting screwed up. But the content is all there. I would love your honest thoughts, responses, feelings, emotions, questions, and anything you have to say.

work.php?id=99270

Thank you!

All my other work is poetry. This work is the only Essay piece that I have written.

Feel free to check out my other works.

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