Hi Hannah! Your nature title caught my eye so I decided to check this out, and I'm super glad I did!! ^-^ I especially like your second poem because it describes being barefoot so well, even the not-so-great parts like stepping on sharp twigs. And the way you turn it around to focus on the good parts about being barefoot is absolutely wonderful. The stanza about rain is so beautiful too! It made me imagine just standing under the clouds and feeling the rain, and now I feel so much more peaceful and calm. Awesome job with these poems; keep writing!! C:
[while trapped in a bucket of popcorn] You know what the worst part is? It's not even butter. We're gonna be destroyed by... ARTIFICIAL FLAVORING! — Blake Bradley, Power Rangers Ninja Storm