I'm not sure. It sounds kind of stiff...If I saw it in a bookstore, I would probably read the back cover but I wouldn't buy it. Is that the name of your Gwenevire book? Wasn't it Sacred?
Sounds interesting...I would buy it, probably. Depends on the back cover and the Art.
Although, considering I know what your story is about, I think it doesn't work 100%. It's just that it infers that the story is basically centered around Gwenevire's sword...but it's still good By the way, please put that story excerpt I read at your house on YWS! I'm dying to critique it! xD
I am always saying "Glad to've met you" to somebody I'm not at all glad I met. If you want to stay alive, you have to say that stuff, though. — Holden Caulfield
