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Teenagers who set out to change the world somehow. And their catchphrase is "Epic!"

I might flip through it.

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Hhhm...that's tough. Maybe a spoof [or something like a spoof] about pirates but with a comical twist. I would pick it up in a bookstore. :)

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I like it. :D maybe a little cliche, but i like it just the same. Something mysterious, maybe. I instantly thought of "The Sight" for some reason. You know, that book about wolves and prophecies...


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Definitely something fantasy, which would probably deter me at first, simply because of genre. But the word sounds cool when you say it- I would read the cover. Catchy titles are hard to come by.

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I like the sound of that, I can't say if it is fantasy or not though. But, I don't think I would pick up that book in the store.


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nice... Very nice! I'd got for something like....

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Whoa...sounds like a freaky ghost story. I would definately read it.

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Period fiction. 18/1900s?
To do with conspiricies(sp?) involving the masons. Probably includes some sort of hunt. If the cover was good I'd pick it up.

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Sounds like a fantasy thing. Wouldn't really pick it up unless the cover was amazing.

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Sounds like a conspiracy book about the Masons. Maybe they're being exterminated by another group?

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lol...I don't know. The two just don't quite go together. I would pick it up anyways. It looks cool/funny/weird?

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When I see the title, I think of science fiction. Fantasy, my favourite genre, is crossed out immediately, and so is romance. So, science fiction and (I just thought of it) contemporaries. Whether I would pick it up, I don't know. Contemporaries - fince, sci-fi - not. However, interesting cover art does miracles, lol.

I still think it is sci-fi.



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*Frequency is fantasy. lol*

Hm...very fantasy. Being myself, I have forced myself to write it, being not very interested in it. Oh, I would pick it up, but I wouldn't read it. Like you said, cover art does miracles.

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Sounds more like an action thriller to me (yes, I know you say it's fantasy). Probably not something I'd be inclined to read, given that it's a single word that I can't picture fitting with a story

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I take it as something about a girl who's telling about her life before some major event changed it. I might pick it up depending on what it says on the back cover (plot summary thingy).

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