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Yeah, I know, but I can't think of anything better.
Um..you're supposed to post a title...
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


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Woops! It totally slipped my mind!

StarBright




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I'm not sure. It sounds kind of stiff...If I saw it in a bookstore, I would probably read the back cover but I wouldn't buy it. Is that the name of your Gwenevire book? Wasn't it Sacred?

Darkest flame
(not my title)
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Nope its not my name! I don't have a name yet...

Sounds kinda morbid. I don't like... Seems kinda over dun.




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I agree--but once again, where is the title you want feedback on?
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Oh my god! I am such a dope!
Sorry...

Moon Bled Sword
(Considering as a title for my book.)




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Sounds interesting...I would buy it, probably. Depends on the back cover and the Art.
Although, considering I know what your story is about, I think it doesn't work 100%. It's just that it infers that the story is basically centered around Gwenevire's sword...but it's still good :wink:
By the way, please put that story excerpt I read at your house on YWS! I'm dying to critique it! xD

Blood on Water
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


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Interesting... Probably... Nope...

I can't! It would take so long to type up! Just crit me in person!

Um...

Monkey gone dumb
(sounds crap)




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Neer. I wouldn't give it a second glance, unless I wanted to laugh my butt off. ^.^

Ivory
(not my title. For my Ayra book, anyways.)
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To simple... Sounds kinda like a Twilight book... You know. I would try to read it!

Spazzeh?
(Running out of crap ideas XD)




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Sounds like a story about teenage girls taking over MSN when their drunk on Coke or something. Not my kind of book >.<

Spirit Song
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Haha! I would so read it!

Nope... I dislike it from the first glimpse.

Bang! Bang!




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Ew! Sounds like some teenage girls who...ew. *barfs*

Tainted soul
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Haha! I got it from a song! XD

Nope... sounds all evil killer.

At deaths end...




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Sounds cliched.
I am tiring with this, but a few more:

1) Wolf eyes
2) Midnight
3) Dark Star
4) Stars on Water
5) Ancient Rain
everything i loved
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