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Down a dark night sky
The small moon shimmers dimly
Rabbits dash all over
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Rabbits dash all over
From burrow to sandy burrow
Like shining luck’s hope
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Like shining luck's hope
All twenty-six pairs finished
I have won your game
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I have won your game
Of pointless, lost tug of war
Over our snapped twine
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Over our snapped twine
The thin red strings of fate broke
And we have realized
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And we have realised
the swan-flight over the lake
great loud beating wings


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Wrote this one earlier:

Over our snapped twine
the ants scramble in zig-zags
their bodies shiny.
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Great loud beating wings
The griffin has descended
Roaring with power
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Roaring with power
Sunlight scatters on a plain
Burning a red hue
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Burning a red hue
The disappearance of blood
Is revolution
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Is revolution
A period of grey stars
Scattered through the sky
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Scattered through the sky
Forgotten constellations
Stories forgotten
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Stories forgotten
To old, brown forest leaves blown
Through stormy gullies
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Through stormy gullies
My hollowness is bigger
A mind of glass breaks
Last edited by Kelisot on Sun Jun 12, 2022 9:03 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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(@Kelisot... your addition of my makes your first line six syllables and not five.)

A mind of glass breaks
When thrown to the dusty floor
Like an antique vase
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(Oops... my bad)

Like an antique vase
Such a fragile life to mourn
My dearest loved ones
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