LSS: Before the Wave Breaks OOC

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Well, this madness is quite well-written and fun to read :P
Also omg. (1) RP Review is fabulous and I'm stealing it thanks very much (2) 9 months?! :O wowwww- actually I'm not surprised; it makes sense for worldbuilding and characters this deep xD
You do not sucketh >:[ And thank you for the original code!! Literally couldn't have done it without you :D
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This is the one lss rp I have not been able to read along with cause you guys are all insane amazing! I was expecting an insane amount of words and y'all somehow still exceeded those expectations xD Amazing job and looking forward to seeing what heights y'all reach in week two!
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Y'all are doing amazing again this week! Looking forward to seeing y'all randomly drop another 5k on us casually on Sunday! I'm also going to attempt to catch up on this hopefully, y'all are just too fast xD
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lmaooooo @katehardy i admire your ambition but there is no pressure if you can't keep up :^) <3 the support is appreciated regardless

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Me: *Going around encouraging everyone to get their posts in to hit wordcount*

*sees y'all at 31k*

Aight Imma head out

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You guys are doing incredible this week. Y'all have done so much that its nearly 5k a day at this point! I'm just in sheer awe xD
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oh my gosh HAHHAHA we legit have no excuse we are just. insane

our brainrots are so strong man we have a slight problem
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this is what happens when you let the brainrot consume you
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heya!! you guys are doing so well :o esp with the long posties and high wordcounts! keep it up!
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Whooooo you all are amazing!! I cannot wait to keep reading this :D *checks word counter* Uhm... the thing is, y'all wrote 136,061 words for me to catch up on, soooooo I'mma have to split my comments into a few posts over a few days XD Anyhow, yep, I'm in awe whenever I see you guys posting in the ship log thread. Keep up the great work!!

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I'm just some guy."

Pffft best intro.

"I'll happily trade you those in return for a heat wave," Shane said sincerely. "If you'd like a drought, too, take some, we've got no shortage of those."

They're talking about the weather, but it seems like they're both serious about it, unlike the usual small talk about weather xD Glad to see them getting along-ish >.>

"Thank you. I look forward to it," Shane said, with such a sincere tone that he felt disguested at himself.

Shane, you might finally make friends ;P

Shane nearly said bye. But that might've been weird. So he went back to his food, which he'd been largely neglecting. At least it was tasty.

...This is so relatable.

"The back door and restroom door make different sounds."

Shane worries about sounding weird for saying "bye" but has no concerns about this xD

Over the buzz of post-party excitement, Caspar could identify everyone's individual gaits. In descending order, Kirk's, Miss Hellen's, and Carter Haddon's steps were always heaviest. Which coincided with, their voices tended to also be the loudest, usually in that same order. Caspar found that consistency amusing more than anything.

All these little observations are so interesting. They really make the world and characters more real!

Caspar was hit instantly by a wave of heat, and thus regret. This was fine.

The way the meme immediately popped into my head-

Caspar himself was never much of a talker. Yet lately, he'd found himself initiating all sorts of discussions far more than he had in his own years of service. Especially whenever it was just him and Tiberius.

Caspar didn't mind it, though.

I feel like Caspar is a major part of keeping them all together <3

No matter how many times Shane had urged Shrimp not to, the cat was always insistent on trying to drink from Shane's coffee.

This is such an epic starting line for a post =P

the Three Seasons Tavern?

So, what are the three seasons?

I don't want to be historically famous-- I think that comes with too much baggage, in my opinion-- but I would like to realize it in the moment if I would be that unfortunate."

Kirk laughed in agreement, but then lifted up his glass with a sigh.

"Here's to none of us being in that situation," he said. "Hopefully."

...Something tells me all of you will end up being in that situation >.>

Nye's full of so many... plants, rocks, everything... and possibility's wound in every little thing. We haven't even fully explored what everything can do."

Yay to both of them getting to nerd out ('bout history and science, respectively)!

"Oh yes," Kirk replied with sarcasm. "Just the occasional splash of water to remind you you're still human. Sometimes even a sprinkle will do."

Yes, gotta get your five drops of water a day to stay human ;D

But laughter sounded suspiciously like crying if you couldn't see someone's face.

Dang. That's such a true observation right there. 0.0

The day that everyone talked about like he was a hero out a storybook, when he was just a man. A man who wanted to go home. A man who knew he couldn't anymore.

:'( </3

Finally, someone else agreed that his victory wasn't something to be celebrated.

This moment. The emotions. The meaning. Ahhh masterful writing.

could he really be considered a master navigator if he always relied on his nose, rather than the actual geography of the city?

I mean, if it works, it works...

It's a personal memorable event shared between two lovers, as proposals should be."

That sounds really sweet and all, but during the festivities? 0-0 Things seem to be building up for something to happen then,, >.<

Again, the universe had impeccable timing, as far as tormenting Hild went.

XP Poor Hild

The bird and Cyrin shared a few long seconds of direct eye contact.

Cyrin and the bird pfft

"Doesn't sound like a name to me," they hissed, trying not to sound as panicked as they felt.

...Tempted to make a character named "Oouugh Ithinkyoucrackedmyback" now XD

"Wait, wait," the man continued to groan, laying limp and squinting up at the sky. "Just give me a second. I think I'm seeing stars."

If it wasn't so important that they needed to keep pinning the man down, Cyrin would've thrown their arms up in frustration. "That's the damn sky!"

"Huh." The man breathed out a sigh of relief. "Wow, you're right. Thank gods. I'm not concussed."

I think this is the best scenario involving the "seeing stars" phrase that I've read xD

"In my head, you're my other bird watching buddy who pushed me off a tree."

*SOBS* Cyrin, that's not very buddy-like of you

"Now I know why my back hurts. I can finally say I've smashed an apple with my back.

XDDD That'd be a great one for "two truths and a lie"

There was a chorus of, "Uncle Bo!" as all the Ashlund children dogpiled him.

Awwwww :D

He'd used a shell to frame it. He picked the shell up off the Isles from the beach he knew Astrid grew up near.

Bo is so thoughtful. The meaningfulness of each present and how each recipient appreciates it so much-- the ability to make people smile like that is something to aspire to :'D

"Let the man cook!"

Let him cook!!


I'll be back with more RP reviews soon ;D
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Oh my gosh @Spearmint... I have so much awe for you diligently reading our insanity and actually loving it ;-; These reviews make my day and I am so glad to see you enjoying it so far!! Great job to you guys too!!
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OMYGOSH MINT we always joke about how we are doing so much for our nonexistent readers but now i can't use that joke anymore LOL

YOU ARE AMAZING ur comments make me smile :,)

also i apologize in advance for anything stupid hendrik, tula, and andy says. pls cleanse ur eyes after they talk
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Quartermaster Carina is right, just beware of those three in general >_>
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HAHA i do be an existent reader =P glad you two enjoyed!! and alright, i'mma get some eye soap ready? >.>
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Good idea >_>
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Great job so far, y'all! Your dedication to LSS is really inspiring and it's always amazing to watch you guys go above and beyond. It's an honor to be racing with you ^^ Good luck on the high seas <33
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