Don't Look Further [DT]

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understandable. take ur time, saru <33
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Right now, I think I'll probably get my CP up on Sunday. I might be able to get it up sooner, but that's currently the one day of the week I don't have any plans. No matter what, I'll definitely have it up by Sunday night, just like you wanted. :)
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awesome! thanks so much !
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Jaylin's up! I had a lot of fun designing them, and I think they still fit with what you wrote in the WFP. <3
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omg! so excited to read <3
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Banish doubt and fear
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Write if you're a writer.
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All the CPs have been submitted!! I can now make the necessary changes to the first chapter.
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Banish doubt and fear
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Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
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Hi, everyone! The FINAL version of Cosette's first entry is in the WFP!
Before I publish it, however, I'm going to need everyone's approval that it's a-ok in regards to the following criteria:

1. Did the way [ I ] portrayed your character match the personality you gave them in your CP?
2. Were there any traces of godmodding or unnecessary conflict that should be edited?
3. Were there any general errors/little fixes that you'd like to resolved before publishing?

If there's anything you'd like to add in regards to that kind of stuff, please, by all means, let me know either here or on the WFP so those changes can be made!
Once I have everyone's certified approval (which you can give on this forum) the first chapter will be up!
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Banish doubt and fear
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Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
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Richard impersonator has my okay. XD




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I probably won't be able to read through the post today, but I should be able to check it over tomorrow or on Monday!
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I'm sorry for taking so long to read it, but I finally read the draft of the post! It looks great. <3 I couldn't find any problems with how you portrayed Jay, and the post itself looked great to me.

I saw that I'm up next for posting this round. Just so I can start thinking about it now, what should I make sure to include in that post when it's my turn?
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Thank you so much! I'm glad everything worked for you.

And there's nothing specific I can think of at the moment, but if you do have questions concerning the general lore of Chaefetis, please let me know.
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Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
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Everything looks great for Kayla! Sorry for the late response, I was on vacation!
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No problem! And awesome!
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
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will do! i'll get right to it
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson




I am and always will be optimist, the hoper of far-flung hopes, the dreamer of improbable dreams.
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