Don't Look Further [DT]

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Welcome to Don't Look Further's DT!

This is where we'll discuss the plot, characters, and specifics of the Storybook!
Also, if you want to claim a spot in the SB, you can do it here!
Here's the WFP link as well!

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(Just for a reminder!)

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Author's Note: This post will likely be edited as the story progresses. Lore will also be stored in the forum!
Last edited by Clairia on Mon Jan 27, 2020 3:29 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Hi! I've been thinking about joining this storybook the past few days, and I've decided to just go for it instead of kicking around the idea. :)

Could I claim Jaylin, please?
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@MageStorrow Absolutely! So excited to see you join!
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I'll try to get my CP up in the next couple of days. :) It should be up by the end of this week at the latest!
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Awesome!
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a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
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omg !! ch 1 is basically done LOLOL i just need approval from everyone to use their characters (n we STILL need a Richard. The draft of ch 1 is on the WFP!!
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It looks interesting - I just skimmed it over. :)

I just have two questions. Would it be possible for Jaylin to be nonbinary? I saw that it was considered a girl's and a boy's name when I was checking it, and I'd love to write more nonbinary characters.

Also, is it alright if the personality I was thinking of giving Jay doesn't match the one that you have right now in the draft? I didn't have much in mind, and I love the idea of combining an aggressive character with a nerd, but I don't want to mess up the CP by changing too much if you're not alright with that.
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Interesting story. I'll take up Richard if it hasn't been taken.




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@MageStorrow yes and yes!! I'll definitely edit both things for you! i just went with a general persona idea that I had but i can totally edit it as soon as your CP is completed! thanks so much for reading & for the feedback! i really appreciate it <3

@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX richard is yours!
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fantastic!
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
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My CP is submitted! I'd love for everyone's to be up around 8:00 PM on Saturday of this week!!

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quick poke for @XxXTheSwordsmanXxX @Saruka @magestorrow
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Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
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Thinking of making Richard the hunter of the group. We have a protector and a negotiator so I thought it would make sense to have someone that was good at hunting and trap laying.




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A wise choice.
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
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Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson





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I can definitely do that! Right now, however, I'm at an overnight camp so I'm a little restricted on how much time I have on technology.
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