About the poetry novella: stars, seas, grounds, all witness to how empires came crumbling down, this story is one that only lives on through statements meaning stars, seas, grounds and their celestial, mer and human beings. as the title says its a story about a star-crossed paramour
Inspired by Crónica de una muerte anunciada - Gabriel Garcia Marquez & The Scarlet Letter - Nathaniel Hawthorne
Venuptra celestial stars, winged sagas, falling stars and moonlit nights
where day is night, and night is day
tis the highest of them all the darkest, most prettiest sight you’ll ever see
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mundane as this may sound, humans are light of it all, right in the middle of the three, Zephyr marked by its role as a helper, but also its long-term hatred with the above mundane as this may sound, humans are the masters of it all
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At the bottom of it all, the bluest of the blue, peace and pearls, ocean, sea, river, shiny scales, tails and river crowns are what build this world into its dreamsome place Aquar
Venuptra Thirty eight hours As long as a night can be measured in hours, Twenty eight hours, Where a day lasts no longer than ten hours, Ten hours, No cities, no differences, there’s only Venuptra, For honor is all that matters in the end, Zero hours
Zephyr Soleyl, bound by the sun Neyzh, bound by the cold snow Perhl, bound by the rain Kingdoms and their people living under the sun, Farming in the snow, Keeping away of the cursed grounds as it rains
Aquar Mar, home to the Royal Family, Oce, home to the sea dwarfs, Hyd, home to the outcasts, It keeps on growing Smaller and smaller Until nothings left
Venuptra monarchy triumphs over democracy masquerade balls are hosted for alliance, meteorite showers for celebrations of age, bridal rites and even newborns, shooting stars are superstitions or are they?
Zephyr snow dances and participating in sun camps are the most treasured memories children of Zephyr have staying inside on rainy days, were once a choice, but now a tradition for a powerful force beyond everyone’s understanding demands it
Aquar swimming in a frozen ocean is considered bad luck, as is swimming with an outcast of sea dwarf all men’s names start with m and all women’s names start with o a strong believe states, a savior will come and lift them up, but for now everyone must put up with the hardships and hold on to their loved ones
Hi Nadya! I love the worldbuilding for this and how you've established these different worlds, it feels super rp-like and I can't wait to see how you do this in poetry! :D
the day Taurus dies every breathing soul feels the guilt it’s the day the stars rise
The day of peace’s demise the moon is nearly atilt the day Taurus dies
Venus, Zephyr and Aquar turn away their angel eyes gone in the blink of a supernova all that was built it’s the day the stars rise
empty truths concealed in white lies there’s nothing left to say to justify the blood spilt the day Taurus dies
curses, empty promises and dark cries if only one truth had been spoken all these flowers wouldn’t wilt it’s the day the stars rise
it’s the day solicitude in Venuptra dies it’s the day Zephyr and Aquar realise the destruction love can atilt the day Taurus dies it’s the day the stars rise
Morayna, descendant from Morana, once a queen, meaning death, winter and plague, never meant to be seen, destined to be free, she’s cursed to rule lands in love with someone from below, she’d put her life in his hands for she’d rather choose death than leave the green
such gorgeous worldbuilding, Nadya! what an interesting combination of aspects of prose with poetry, and I am really excited to see how that will develop over the course of your napo journey!
also: I really love your structured poetry here, especially your recent villanelle; those are super tricky, but you did such a great job incorporating lore into the lines while maintaining the villanelle structure - "empty truths concealed in white lies / there’s nothing left to say to justify the blood spilt" is beautiful!
In a shadow there is the blessing of a shadow. — Kuki Shūzō
@cocteau , thank you so much for your comment! I wanted to try to stick as much to traditional poetry forms this napo, so there you have the villanelle XD I'm really glad you're excited