star-crossed paramour

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poetry novella: star-crossed paramour

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You are the supernova,
the night jewel and
the celestial tomorrow


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Rated: 16+ for themes
Goal: write a minimum of 30 poems, finish the draft





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About the poetry novella:
stars, seas, grounds,
all witness to how empires came crumbling down,
this story is one that only lives on through statements
meaning stars, seas, grounds and their celestial, mer and human beings.
as the title says its a story about a star-crossed paramour

Inspired by
Crónica de una muerte anunciada - Gabriel Garcia Marquez
& The Scarlet Letter - Nathaniel Hawthorne




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world-building

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The Worlds

Venuptra
celestial stars,
winged sagas,
falling stars and
moonlit nights

where day is night,
and night is day

tis the highest of them all
the darkest, most prettiest
sight you’ll ever see

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mundane as this may sound,
humans are light of it all,
right in the middle of the three,
Zephyr
marked by its role as a helper,
but also its long-term hatred with the above
mundane as this may sound,
humans are the masters of it all

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At the bottom of it all,
the bluest of the blue,
peace and pearls,
ocean, sea, river,
shiny scales, tails and river crowns
are what build this world
into its dreamsome place
Aquar




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woahhhh i love the idea of incorporating worldbuilding into NaPo!! and those worlds are so beautiful too :O
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Thank you mint!
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The Regions

Venuptra

Thirty eight hours
As long as a night can be measured in hours,
Twenty eight hours,
Where a day lasts no longer than ten hours,
Ten hours,
No cities, no differences, there’s only Venuptra,
For honor is all that matters in the end,
Zero hours

Zephyr
Soleyl, bound by the sun
Neyzh, bound by the cold snow
Perhl, bound by the rain
Kingdoms and their people living under the sun,
Farming in the snow,
Keeping away of the cursed grounds as it rains

Aquar
Mar, home to the Royal Family,
Oce, home to the sea dwarfs,
Hyd, home to the outcasts,
It keeps on growing
Smaller and smaller
Until nothings
left




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The People

of Venuptra

Star-fae with wings,
Clever minds,
Cunning hearts,
Showering with blessings
and curses are their style

of Zephyr
Humans who are
strong in bone and
hopeful in heart
Agrees to disagree,
Always working towards a better
tomorrow

of Aquar
Children of the tide,
obedient and kind,
Forced to slavery at the hands
of winged creatures,
Yet no complains,
For the savior will come




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The Traditions

Venuptra

monarchy triumphs over democracy
masquerade balls are hosted for alliance,
meteorite showers for celebrations of age,
bridal rites and even newborns,
shooting stars are superstitions or are they?

Zephyr
snow dances and participating in sun camps
are the most treasured memories
children of Zephyr have
staying inside on rainy days,
were once a choice, but now a tradition
for a powerful force beyond everyone’s understanding demands it

Aquar
swimming in a frozen ocean is considered bad luck,
as is swimming with an outcast of sea dwarf
all men’s names start with m and
all women’s names start with o
a strong believe states, a savior will come and lift them up,
but for now everyone must put up
with the hardships and
hold on to their loved ones




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star-crossed paramour

this story can only begin
by knowing how it ends:
with star-crossed paramour

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starting april 1st




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Hi Nadya! I love the worldbuilding for this and how you've established these different worlds, it feels super rp-like and I can't wait to see how you do this in poetry! :D
Good is not a thing you are. It's a thing you do.
- Ms. Marvel

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Thank you Ant!!


The day Taurus dies
Villanelle

the day Taurus dies
every breathing soul feels the guilt
it’s the day the stars rise

The day of peace’s demise
the moon is nearly atilt
the day Taurus dies

Venus, Zephyr and Aquar turn away their angel eyes
gone in the blink of a supernova all that was built
it’s the day the stars rise

empty truths concealed in white lies
there’s nothing left to say to justify the blood spilt
the day Taurus dies

curses, empty promises and dark cries
if only one truth had been spoken all these flowers wouldn’t wilt
it’s the day the stars rise

it’s the day solicitude in Venuptra dies
it’s the day Zephyr and Aquar realise the destruction love can atilt
the day Taurus dies
it’s the day the stars rise




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The Queen of Zephyr
Limerick

Morayna, descendant from Morana, once a queen,
meaning death, winter and plague, never meant to be seen,
destined to be free, she’s cursed to rule lands
in love with someone from below, she’d put her life in his hands
for she’d rather choose death than leave the green




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such gorgeous worldbuilding, Nadya! what an interesting combination of aspects of prose with poetry, and I am really excited to see how that will develop over the course of your napo journey!

also: I really love your structured poetry here, especially your recent villanelle; those are super tricky, but you did such a great job incorporating lore into the lines while maintaining the villanelle structure - "empty truths concealed in white lies / there’s nothing left to say to justify the blood spilt" is beautiful!
In a shadow there is the blessing of a shadow.
— Kuki Shūzō




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@cocteau , thank you so much for your comment! I wanted to try to stick as much to traditional poetry forms this napo, so there you have the villanelle XD I'm really glad you're excited



Love is the one thing we're capable of perceiving that transcends dimensions of time and space.
— Dr. Amelia Brand, Interstellar