This is the second "real" poem I've ever written (I'm just now learning the inside outs of poetry) so any advice you can give me would be awesome! It needs much work :3
I know this isn't exactly poetry, but I really need help with it and you're a poetry expert. Do you review song lyrics? If so, link is below. If not, just skip over this request. ^.^
"It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small." — Neil Armstrong
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