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Sun Dec 04, 2011 6:29 pm
Niebla says...



Hey Audy,

Could I request a review for this? viewtopic.php?t=91137
It would really help if you could give it a general/fairly in depth review. If it's too long and you don't have the time, don't worry about it - I feel really bad asking for a review on something that's as long as this.

Thanks,

~MorningMist~
  





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Sun Dec 04, 2011 9:38 pm
KatTrain says...



post941103.html#p941103
Review please? :)

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Thu Dec 08, 2011 11:07 pm
Flower~Child says...



Will you review my poem? topic91268.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

  





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Fri Dec 09, 2011 3:11 am
Kafkaescence says...



A review on this would be awesome.
#TNT

WRFF
  





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Mon Dec 12, 2011 2:10 pm
Twit says...



If you could review this I'd be very grateful. ^_^
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Fri Dec 16, 2011 3:00 am
BerlynnRae says...



Would you mind reviewing my novella? Ghost of Theater Two?
Prolouge:
viewtopic.php?t=90746
Chapter one:
viewtopic.php?t=90955
I haven't had time to post the next chapters yet. Thanks so much! ~Berlynn Rae
  





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Mon Dec 19, 2011 12:27 am
Justagirl says...



Hi there, Audy :) Nice lemon, by the way XP

Would you feel up to reviewing this essay of mine that I had to do for my English class? All you need to know about it + what type of review I'd like (since you seem particular about that :) ) is in the spoiler at the top!

Thankssomuch (:
Justagirl
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Wed Mar 07, 2012 11:41 pm
Audy says...



I'm reviving this thread from its grave.

Anybody need a review?
  





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Fri Mar 09, 2012 4:03 pm
beckiw says...



This - work.php?id=93804 be needing some looooooves my wonderful Audy!

Thank you very much! :)
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Sun Mar 11, 2012 3:50 am
Audy says...



Done! Love it I did ;)

Anyone else?
  





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Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:56 pm
Twit says...



Could I have reviews on this and this please? Sorry to hit you with two requests at once, but urgency is a little bit of an issue. :)
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Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:24 pm
Shearwater says...



Can I possibly have a review for this? Exodus
It's the first chapter of a novel but due to my rustiness, it needs some shining. :D
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Tue Mar 20, 2012 3:51 am
ENCR says...



Hi,

Please review my short story

work.php?id=93898

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Tue Mar 27, 2012 4:33 pm
Audy says...



Sorry about that Pink! Here it is!

Exodus- Review.doc
Hope you don't mind that I did it in this form (it was just a whole lot easier for me)
(63 KiB) Downloaded 82 times



ENCR, I'll get to yours right away!


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Wed Mar 28, 2012 7:00 pm
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Sins says...



When you find the time, could you check out this for me, please?

I want to warn you though that it's a chapter from a novel of mine, but it's not actually chapter one... It's a pretty stand alone piece though and although it's not the first chapter, it's one of the first ones. If you're not up to it though, that's 100% fine.

Please and thank you!
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