Hiya, I'd really appreciate a review of the first chapter of my novel (Romance): post889219.html#p889219
Thank you!!
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Hey could you please review Chapter 1 of my new planned short novel The Shuji Tower. I'm writing this to have fun and to also get practice in writing as I haven't really written much.
Me again! I'm sorry, but you're an awesome reviewer. Please look at my romance short story, I really have a problem with it but I can't identify what's wrong with it. viewtopic.php?t=86380
We'reallalittle weird. Andlife's a littleweird. Andwhen wefindsomeonewhoseweirdnessis compatiblewithours, we joinupwith them and fallin mutual weirdnessand callit love.
Hi JP, Can you please review my story viewtopic.php?t=87624. I will be grateful for the help. Cheers, Phoenix23
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I'd really like some super harsh critique on this. I've gotten a lot of great reviews but nothing that was complete honest and harsh. I hope you can help me with that. :]
Thanks!
~Jas
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I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
There are some things you can't share without ending up liking each other, and knocking out a twelve-foot mountain troll is one of them. — J.K. Rowling
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