I might have something else in a couple of minutes if that's alright
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
I would be honored if you swing on over and check this little adventure story I just cooked up. It is not yet finished but is looking to become the first story I've ever brought to completion, I would love it if you would review its progress so far:
They are not quite what one would call impressive but, in my opinion, have potential, the kind of potential that only a well constructed review can bring out in a story,
The moment you say that one set of moral ideas can be better than another, you are, in fact, measuring them both by a standard, saying that one of them conforms to that standard more nearly than the other. C. S. Lewis
Hey. I have been writing this novel for a while and I've just edited all the chapters I have posted and I will add a couple of new chapters and I would like someone to review it from the beginning. novel.php/id=1528 Thanks, I would really appreciate it!!
Trust is like a mirror, able to be fixed if broken, but you can still see the cracks.
Writing is a form of personal freedom. It frees us from the identity we see in the making all around us. In the end, writers will write not to be outlaw heroes but to save themselves, to survive as individuals.
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