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Mon Nov 01, 2010 3:56 pm
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Jashael says...



Done both! =))
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Mon Nov 01, 2010 11:49 pm
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SilentRain says...



Hello agian!!! This is another one of my poems, topic71436.html
It doesn't have a title yet, think you could suggest one??

Thanks,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Tue Nov 02, 2010 5:52 pm
Idraax says...



Hey, could you do either a chapter of my novel-in-the-works or some of my really old and somewhat mortifying(for me at least) writing? You can pick, but if you decide to rewiew the second one, please read the warning before the last story/snippet; it's there for a reason. Thanks!
some of my really old and somewhat mortifying works
my-novel-in-the-works
Check these out please! :)
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Thu Nov 04, 2010 10:07 am
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spike71294 says...



Can you review the first chapter of my novel- 'Wings and fins'?
post781605.html#p781605
Thanks in advance. :)
  





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Fri Nov 05, 2010 2:35 am
Jashael says...



I'm done with Apple and SR...you guys are next. Sarreh for the late reviewing...I had the reviewer's block XD
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Fri Nov 05, 2010 4:18 pm
Flower~Child says...



I have a poem, will you review it for me? topic71564.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

  





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Sat Nov 06, 2010 1:15 am
Rascalover says...



topic71121.html

Here's the link. Thank you
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Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html
  





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Tue Nov 09, 2010 12:42 pm
Jashael says...



Done all, except for the advance critique.
Rascal, I'll need to have time for that. Thanks for the patience. =)))
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Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:01 pm
Bickazer says...



Hi~

If you don't mind, could you possibly take a look at the first part of my YA fantasy novel? Although honestly I'd love it if you were interested enough to review the rest I have up (about five parts), but I understand if you're busy, so no pressure.

topic70759.html

Thanks in advance!
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Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:44 am
Jashael says...



okay! I'll see what I can do.. =)))) thanks for the request!
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Fri Nov 12, 2010 3:26 pm
Roadnevertravelled says...



Hi. Can you pretty pretty please review my story, My Hero? And if you can think of a better name for it, that would be awesome. Thanks!

topic71891.html
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Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:11 pm
Sins says...



Heya, Jash :)

Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of my new novel for me?

topic71938.html

It needs a lot of help... So I need your reviewing powers. Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Sun Nov 14, 2010 2:34 pm
LadySpark says...



will you please review
my short story Fatal love
and the fire bird: here are the links:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71430 < fatal love
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=717 < firebird

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

I will review in return since I'm low on points
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Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:04 am
Roal says...



Hey Jash! Can you please review my chapter 2 p.2 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer? Thanks
My death trap is finally gone :D
... Actually it just move on to chapter 3 :[

topic72113.html
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
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