Hi everyone this is the start of a story I am writing for a contest against some of my friends, so reviews would help me win and get the grand prize of ten bucks and pride. Be as harsh as you want.
A cold wind blew in through the open window, waking me. Not that it was a real window, it was a hole in the wall with bars in it. I lay there for a few more minutes, letting the cold breeze touch my face. It was nice, relaxing, almost as if I was in the woods. I could almost imagine I was free from this jail cell, out in the wild with Hunter. Maybe we would be going on another scheme; robbing a store, breaking into the bank, it’s all for fun, of course. We don’t need beer or money, Not that I liked either, beer tastes like guys sweat. Well, at least I imagined it did, I never wanted to find out. It’s just so much fun making the whole town freak out, thinking that they aren’t safe. That they needed a hero. And who shows up, but the incredible Shadowfly. Yup, that's me, every other scheme. We switch being superhero and villain. My favorite turn was villain was when I got to pretend to steal a valuable painting from the small art museum in our town. It was hilarious seeing the confused and scared police forces’ faces. They didn’t know how to attack me without the painting being destroyed, and then came Shadowfly, our towns new hero. Stronger than strong, faster than fast, better than the best. Also known as Hunter Gordon and Shira Partridge, local A+ average juniors from Matherson High School. Or, at least he is. Now I’m a juvenile delinquent, stuck in this smelly jail cell, but I'll explain that later.
Before we thought of Shadowfly, Hunter and I had pretty boring lives. Sure, we were the smartest kids in high school, the two geniuses. We took IQ test last year, he got 129 and I got 125. I’m proud though, he’s more of a logical thinker, which is what the test looks for, and I’m more personal. I think of how people react, I know what they’ll say next, it’s also called being a smart ass. I guess that talent of mine is why we started to have fun at night. At first we’d just walk in the woods, hang out, but then we thought of other things to do. We’d spend days studying plans on how to get into restricted areas in town, into stores. Let’s just say planning is Hunter’s middle name. He loved it. I’d chose where would invoke the most excitement, and he’d plan how to get in there without getting caught. Soon that wasn’t enough for us though. We needed something bigger, something like a criminal. So one day after school, I passed a halloween store selling a rat mask. Next to it was a long, dark cloak and a pair of butterfly wings. I looked at them a while, thinking. What if we created a superhero? But, for a superhero, we need a criminal. How about, Shadowfly and The Rat? I ran the rest of the way to our meeting place; a old treehouse from when we were kids. Hunter was there, waiting. Out of breath, I explained my idea that we could be a super villain and hero. At first he was skeptical, but grew to love the idea. The planning, cunningness, risk, that this plan would use was exactly what he loved.
Two weeks after I explained my idea, we were ready for our first subterfuge. I would be villain first, while Hunter swooped in to defeat me. We decided the Navel air base in town would be the best place to start. They had planes, plans, and people to kill; we wouldn’t kill anyone of course, but people would be questioning what The Rat was doing, what he wanted. The evil Rat could be anything from a serial killer to a foreign spy. We had planned our endeavor perfectly. Hunter had studied work schedules and maps and had planned our attack flawlessly. I was so excited, but still nervous. This was 10 times bigger than our last scheme, and ten times more dangerous. I hadn’t been able to focus in school that day, not even Lizzie Marshall, the “ queen” of the school telling me there was dirt on my face made me focus. I would usually have a comeback, but I didn’t. I was too busy focusing on gymnastic moves and perfect timing I would be using that night. Lizzie had followed me the rest of that school day, trying to bother me. What was with her? I finally told her to can it and leave me the **** alone, which she did.
Adrenaline pulsed though my veins as I put on the mask. Hunter’s smiling face was the last thing I saw before I became The Rat. We had gone through every procedure to be protected; I was wearing contacts to conceal my bright blue eye's and had my auburn hair completely covered by the mask. I was wearing pads in my shoes to appear taller, and pads in my clothes to appear more muscular. I needed to wear these so that when Hunter was The Rat he’d look the same. No one would believe that The rat would suddenly transform from a thin girl to a muscular boy. Good thing I had almost no cleavage. As I approached the Navel Air Base, I started getting excited. this was easy, just a more fun version of our earlier adventures. I climbed the telephone pole until I was high enough to jump over the fence. With the softest thud, I landed perfectly. I snuck around to a pre chosen door and waited. In approximately 14 minutes, a janitor would come out after a night on the job. Waiting, I thought back to my empty bed at home. I was too old for my parents to check on me anymore, but maybe tonight they would. They’d see the back of a wig on a white ballon and pillows under my covers. And they’d think it was me. Maybe Mom would kiss me on the cheek, like she did when I was little. Not likely, she never did anything to show love towards me. The last time she hugged me was my birthday, two years ago. . . The door banged open suddenly, waking me from my reverie. The janitor turned away from me and walked away. I smirked. Oh how he’d freak out in the morning knowing he let me in, threatening the governments security. As I walked down the dark halls, the adrenaline faded. That’s it? No challenges? Yeah, sure there were the surveillance cameras, but it was easier than pie to weave through their blind spots. Finally, I reached the room labeled FLIGHT PLANS. Letting the cameras catch part of me entering the room, I closed the door behind me and waited. Soon enough, two men crashed through the door. I stuck my foot out, tripping them. Grabbing a conveniently placed rope, I jumped on them and tied them together. They kicked and fought, but in the end, me, a 17 year old girl was stronger than two 30 year old men. Not that anyone could see it, but I was smiling. I banged open the door dramatically for the cameras and threw the men out. I closed the door and took my phone out of my pocket. I dialed Hunter’s number. He didn’t answer, but we had decided that would be safer. I hung up, knowing he would be coming in about ten minutes to “save the day”.
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