A hero isn’t defined by winning. Loads of heroes die in the effort. Most of them never get any recognition. No, a hero is just somebody who does the right thing when it would be far, far easier to do nothing.
As you may have guessed, I'm here to ask you to please review my poem, Photograph to Sand. I'm afraid there's a rather long spoiler first, but it's fairly important to read it, so one can start to understand...
Also, while I can usually take harsh criticism, there is a reason why I'm a little touchy about this one (The spoiler will explain) So please don't be too harsh on the content, but don't feel the need to pussyfoot around if you feel criticism's in order.
Thank you Oh, and the link's in my signature.
Vampyre
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed Made soft with all her razor blades, That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked. As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades
viewtopic.php?t=73335 viewtopic.php?t=73258 Hiyyaahh! It'd be awesome if you could review either one of these poems for me! It's fine if you don't want too... I mean, it looks like you've got 48 others to do too as it is! xxxx
Are you willing to do a chapter instead of poem. I just think your methodology best fits what I am looking for. I know it's not your forte but I would appreciate an attempt.
I don't know if i've stumbled across this too late but I hope not! I've got four poems on here and would love a review for any of them, feel free topick and choose whichever one(s) you like!
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