Hi Skins. I would like to have one more opinion on my NaNo prologue (fantasy fiction) before I decide how to revise it. I would be ever so grateful if you would review it. And I'll review your novel. (XD major bribe)
Oh, and before I forget, I really don't mind what type of review you give me. I'll be happy with nit-picking, or general impression... whatever floats your boat.
"There's a big difference between shooting a target and shooting a charging Wargal. A target isn't usually trying to kill you." ~Halt, Ranger's Apprentice Book Two: The Burning Bridge
Hullo Skins. It's been a long while since I've written anything, but can you check out the start to my new book? Would like to know about character/structure and content. Merci beaucoup Monsieur!
Hey Skinsy! Now I need some of your reviewing expertise.
Can you review the Prologue of Rebirth? I need some feedback so that I know it's okay. It's pretty short, so no worries about trudging through a long story.
Tiger
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
Hey there, Skins. Finally you're free, and before someone else requests, I am going to post---because I won't share you now. xD! Just kidding, 'kay?
You've reviewed the prologue and chapter-1 of my shared novel with Lily, but now it's on my account, I am doing it alone and the name's changed. Gosh, I am tired of explaining. Okay, so here's the chapter-2: Know I'm Here(2)
~Shubhi
P.S. Thanks!
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Hi there Skins! I would be quite thankful if you would review my work with your pretty badges and all. You can do a mix of nit pick and overall, or whatever you like. Anything is helpful! It is entitled "The Feeling of Christmas." Hope you like it!
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