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Mon Apr 22, 2024 1:20 am
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Inferno says...



Inferno's Review Café!

OPEN FOR BUSSINESS
Now serving:
Toasty Reviews - fresh off the oven

Hey all! Welcome to my Café! Make yourself comfortable. Pull up a chair. Or you can just order to-go. I will review almost anything. ALMOST. Here are some guidelines:

Will NOT Review Writing With:
.intense swearing
.vulgar or explicit sexual content

Will Review Writing With:
.anything other than things listed above
.all genres
.violence
.poetry
.articles
.etc. etc. etc.
WARNING!
I do not sugar-coat my reviews! If I see something wrong, I will tell it like it is.

*ding* Ah, your order is almost ready. Enjoy!
Last edited by Inferno on Mon May 06, 2024 10:14 pm, edited 5 times in total.
An apple a day keeps the doctor away... if you throw it hard enough.
  





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Fri Apr 26, 2024 6:41 pm
Fishr says...



February, 1775 – Scotchtown Plantation

Please. I’m mainly interested how the characters connect with the reader. Thanks!
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  





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Fri Apr 26, 2024 7:32 pm
Inferno says...



@Fishr
Ooh! Looks like a long one. I'm quite busy, but I'll get to it as soon as possible!
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Fri Apr 26, 2024 7:40 pm
Fishr says...



I never know anymore if my works are long or not. Lol Thank you!
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  





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Mon Apr 29, 2024 11:39 pm
Inferno says...



Your order is ready!
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Tue Apr 30, 2024 8:03 pm
Moonlily says...



I know it's not in the greenroom but you don't mind looking at the Prologue for my book. just a warning it is both a very very rough first draft and deals with themes like Heaven and Hell. I do worry its a bit heavy on exposition and telling rather then showing

Everbound Prologue : Tapestries And Temptations.
  





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Tue Apr 30, 2024 11:00 pm
Inferno says...



*ba-ding*
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Mon May 06, 2024 7:19 pm
AnotherMoses says...



Hey, I've got a poem in search of a review. I've embedded a link here.

Thank you in advance.
  





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Mon May 06, 2024 10:09 pm
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@AnotherMoses
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This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
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