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Tue Jun 30, 2020 3:19 pm
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lillianna says...



hey fellow YWS user!

my name is lulon/harper(previously known as harperlouise06), and i’ve been on YWS for eight months. i post both poetry and art, and also do blogs at random. i’d love to be posting more works, but i’m not good at picking works to review. so, i’m taking requests and also feel free to suggest works that i should review! have a lovely day!

will review:
poetry
art
lyrics
short stories

i’m not confident in reviewing novels yet, but i will try if you really want me to!
i would prefer to be called mrs. harry styles.
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Tue Jun 30, 2020 6:38 pm
JesseWrites says...



I want to help you get them points, so can you review my poem?

Drowning in Torment

Warning: It references like blood and stuff, so yeah.
“My thoughts are stars I cannot fathom into constellations.”
― John Green, The Fault in Our Stars
  





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Tue Jun 30, 2020 6:49 pm
lillianna says...



JesseWrites wrote:I want to help you get them points, so can you review my poem?

Drowning in Torment

Warning: It references like blood and stuff, so yeah.

no problem!
i would prefer to be called mrs. harry styles.
the official yws mermaid


(previously harperlouise06 and lulon)
  





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Tue Jun 30, 2020 7:07 pm
lillianna says...



@JesseWrites all done!
i would prefer to be called mrs. harry styles.
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Wed Jul 01, 2020 7:36 pm
Hkumar says...



Hey lulon! It will be great if you would express your views on my poem Frittering away and tell me if it needs some more corrections. :D
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Wed Jul 01, 2020 8:02 pm
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lillianna says...



Hkumar wrote:Hey lulon! It will be great if you would express your views on my poem Frittering away and tell me if it needs some more corrections. :D

no problem! will be done in the hour!
i would prefer to be called mrs. harry styles.
the official yws mermaid


(previously harperlouise06 and lulon)
  





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Wed Jul 01, 2020 8:40 pm
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lillianna says...



@Hkumar it’s complete!
i would prefer to be called mrs. harry styles.
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(previously harperlouise06 and lulon)
  





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Wed Sep 02, 2020 5:38 pm
LZPianoGirl says...



Hey lulon! I was wondering if you could review my short story, I'm Just A Pet Rock. You don't have to if you don't want to!
"Yes, of course duct tape works in a near-vacuum. Duct tape works anywhere.
Duct tape is magic and should be worshiped."

- Mark Watney, The Martian (book)
  





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Wed Sep 02, 2020 5:41 pm
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lillianna says...



LZPianoGirl wrote:Hey lulon! I was wondering if you could review my short story, I'm Just A Pet Rock. You don't have to if you don't want to!

i sure will after school and dryland!
i would prefer to be called mrs. harry styles.
the official yws mermaid


(previously harperlouise06 and lulon)
  





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Thu Dec 03, 2020 2:46 pm
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Hkumar says...



Hi!
I saw you were looking something for reviewing, so I came here again for a review request. If you don't mind can you review my poem Co-rumination and give your inputs. It's still in the green room as of now ^^'
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Fri Dec 04, 2020 8:51 pm
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lchoi says...



Hi! I would love it if you could take a look at my new short story. Thank so much!

the after - 1/2
  





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Fri Dec 04, 2020 9:58 pm
lillianna says...



lchoi wrote:Hi! I would love it if you could take a look at my new short story. Thank so much!

the after - 1/2

of course! that will be done by tomorrow. :)
i would prefer to be called mrs. harry styles.
the official yws mermaid


(previously harperlouise06 and lulon)
  








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