Young Writers Society

Hello everyone!

As you can see from the title (I tend to exploit the potential puns I could create from my name), this will be my catalogue for all personally requested reviews.

I love to read both fiction and non-fiction (leaning more towards non-fiction).

In following Elysian's format, here will be the genres and literary types I prefer to review:



Essentially, I can review those that aren't included in the list but they won't be my top priority. To those who might have second thoughts on entrusting their academic essays/articles to me, I've been assigned as a news editor in my school newspaper. Plus, accepting or rejecting my suggestions is always up to you.

Credibility:

Poetry
Dreamer|A Poem by F.Lockers
The caesura of broken lines by Haraya
Elephants and Carpets by LadyGemstone
what to write? by Liberty

Novel Chapters
Chapter 1: I'm thinking by Cow
- This is the longest and most detailed review I have (abt 15k+ characs). However, the quantity doesn't determine the quality so if you want to check it for yourself, message me and I can send it to you (the author unpublished the work).
Abernathy's House of Magic Chapter 1 by xenon
Slave Girl Chapter 2.2 by Shadeflame
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of The Dead Chapter 1.1 by HarryHardy

Short story
Starving Dogs by aeternum

Essays
The Life, Times, and Adventures of the Oxford Comma
Diversification by Kareem Taiwo1


Note: Please don't expect fast reviews because I reread works until I've fully grasp the message you're trying to convey and possibly the grammar mistakes.

Yo yo I'm a crappy gay writer who kind of sucks at it. That being an understatement
I'm starting to write a book called "Pain For The Game" It'd be nice if you could check it out
It's not Done yet but I don't wanna write a book that no one's gonna like

On it @Catamp

Heya! I've skimmed your other poetry reviews and I like them a lot so I was hoping you could review a poem of mine that I just posted - what to write? (it's from this years' NaPo).

Sure, @liberty. I might not do it immediately (Maybe after 1-2 hours?) because I'll be resting a bit. I just finished, Catamps. Is that okay?

edit: On second thought, I might rest a little bit longer. I might not critique it properly because I'm knackered out.

Naw, it's cool. Take your time!

Hey!

I was wondering if you would review the first chapter of my book A Valkyrie's Dream
I would really appreciate it!
Thanks
-Shade

Sure! After I do Libs

Hi Katteex! I really liked the review you did for A Valkyrie's Dream, so I was wondering if you would review Slave Girl: Chapter 2.2 for me. I'm sorry that it isn't the first chapter, but if you want to you could just read over the first ones to get context. However, if you don't want to or just don't have time I'm sure you could give a good review for my chapter.
Thank you in advance!
Oh, and congratulations on being featured member!

Really, @Shadeflame? I thought it wasn't that constructive so that's why I didn't count it as a review. I'll be on it perhaps tomorrow because my article's deadline is today, sorry about that . Anyway, thank you again !!

@Katteex
It might have not seemed like much but it actually helped me a lot.

Hi Katteex! I like how you delve deep into the writers' works when you review them. I hoped you could do the same for my poem Poetry Exercise: The caesura of broken lines.

Hello, @Haraya. Many thanks for the compliment . I hope it's alright with you if I'll review your work tomorrow or the day after that?

Yes! It's all right .

@Haraya: I've already created a review, but I saw that you changed your title? It used to be "Enjambment and Linebreaks." Question, does your title have a relation to your poem or it's just about using Enjambments from the "Poem a week" club prompt (just for clarification)?

@Shadeflame: I might place a review in Chapter 2.2 in a few hours. I'm re-reading the past chapters and taking into account Laela's slightly established personality. I'm also rechecking if my critique doesn't assert my writing style to yours. Sorry about that.