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Wed Jan 20, 2021 10:35 pm
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Shady says...



All caught up! ^.^

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Thu Jan 21, 2021 4:36 am
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raindrops says...



Hi! raindrops here.

I'm new here in YWS and am looking for some reviews. I wonder if you'd like to drop by on the first few chapters of the novel I'm working on. If you'd like to, thanks in advance.

Entropy - Chapter One
Entropy - Chapter Two
Entopy - Chapter Three
  





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Fri Jan 22, 2021 9:36 pm
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Caught up again! ^-^

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Thu Jan 28, 2021 1:46 pm
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lillianna says...



could you review my poem? lulubelle
i'm probably listening to taylor swift.
can you tell i love pink?

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(previously harperlouise06 and lulon)
  





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Sun Jan 31, 2021 9:07 pm
Shady says...



All caught up! Anyone else? ^-^

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Mon Feb 01, 2021 10:40 am
piyaliarchives says...



Hi there! There is a short story which I wrote for a contest for writing a gripping hook. It is called "The Golden Cradle"

The Golden Cradle

Thanks! :)
  





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Tue Feb 02, 2021 3:14 am
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Hey @piyaliarchives I'd love to read it! But it's saying you've got it saved as a draft not published? So I can't see it :(

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Tue Feb 02, 2021 5:17 am
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piyaliarchives says...



I edited it but forgot to publish it!
I published it now :)
  





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Tue Dec 14, 2021 12:25 am
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fatherfig says...



If you are up for it I would like a review on this poem i posted :>
Born by the Spindle
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Tue Dec 14, 2021 10:22 am
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Shady says...



Thanks for the request @TypoWithoutCoffee! I will be traveling quite a bit in the next like two weeks, but I'll try to fit this in as soon as I can ^-^ Excited to read it!

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Wed Apr 27, 2022 1:54 pm
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NewHope says...



Hello Shady,

This seems to have died done a little... I was wondering if you would review a poem... I posted it days ago and it's still in the Green Room. It's a little violent... a little bit of a rant and it's called: Born A Girl
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Thu Apr 28, 2022 6:51 pm
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Rascalover says...



I would love a review on my realistic short story called My Roots:

My Roots

If you like what you see, lest me know because I have turned this into a novel and may be posting it in the novel forum here on YWS!

Thank you so much!!
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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