Hi alliyah! If you could, I’d love it if you could offer some criticism on this poem. <3 Winter coming I think it got out of the Green Room rather lightly and I feel like it’s too much description without other stuff? But anyway, I’d love to hear your thoughts if you aren’t too busy!
Finally finished those last two reviews, so feel free to bring in your requests - expect about a week delay in me responding to review requests, but rest assured I will always get them eventually!
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal. — William S. Burroughs
I'd be happy to!
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