Young Writers Society

Hi there! I'd really appreciate it if someone could review this short story I've written: Phantoms

Hello there! I'd like someone to please review the fourth installment of my book "America Gone," which you an find here--

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Vilnius/America-Gone--Chapter-Four-148114

Hello, i'd like to request a review for the most recent chapters of my novel, here's the link: Neighborhood Tales: The Tale of a Hedgehog (Chapters 3 and 4)

I know someone probably needs to complete some of their checklist challenges, so here you go! Have fun reading this depressing short story!

Honorine's Revenge
Warning-- Language, Implied Violence

I would appreciate some in depth reviews on my short story:

Between the Stones

And I would also appreciate an in depth review on this poem:

Dystopic Visions

Hi, no pressure, but I'd love some feedback for my story Wildfire, parts one and two!


Wildfires (Part 1)


Wildfire (Part 2)

I'm back here again!

Blood Sisters - Prologue (Jose)

I have a free style poem here--

Notorious RBG

Hey! I need help getting my last two chapters of my novel out of the green room. Can ya help me out? The Rage (Chapter 7)

Hi guys,

Just wrote and published my first novel :

https://www.amazon.com/Who-Lies-Will-No ... B08KNTJ3CN

Free with Kindle Unlimited.

Lots of positivie feedback from friends and family, but it would be great to get some unbiased opinion too.

Dan.

Hi! I would like a review for the first chapter of my first Novella here, The Legend of Ikor. It's on my profile.

Thanks!

Hey there... no pressure but I'd love some feedback for chapters three and four of my novel, Blood Sisters.

Chapter Three

Chapter Four

(If you're not just editing, but reviewing for content, I'd still love help with my other instillations!)

Hi, I'm back again!

Blood Sisters - Chapter 5 (Rory)

And as always, if you're not just correcting grammar, but also for inconsistencies, plot holes, etc., I recommend reading the book so far.