Hello! Im here needing a review on my writing style, so i can do some edits
Any of my chapters are fine but i would prefer some later ones, such as 22 or 24. 25 is rather violent and rated 16+. None of the chapters have any swearing or sex
I'm all done @Lorelie. I've temporarily marked this thread as closed so I can catch up on reviews for @yizhongt and @Stormcrow (which I promise I'll get on ASAP), and when I'm finished reviewing for those people I will open it back up.
Hello! I would really appreciate if you could review my satire for me! The Creativity Epidemic It is my first satire and I could use some feedback! Thanks!
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall
You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man. — Dallas Winston, The Outsiders
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