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Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:21 pm
Demeter says...



Rascalover, yours is finally done. :)

With that said, I re-open this thread. :D
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Wed Feb 04, 2009 10:06 pm
*DaughteroftheMoon* says...



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It is done.
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Sun Feb 15, 2009 9:14 pm
Lord Anzius says...



Please review this I'll give you a cookie :D

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Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:42 pm
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Hey, peoples – no line! :)
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Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:39 am
Anna09 says...



I have a short story that is streamline fiction I suppose :)
I am in desperate need of a detailed review, as it is both a school project, and something that I hope to submit to magazines.

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Thanks so much!! :D :D :D
  





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Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:05 pm
Lauren says...



Hi, Dem :D I feel so cheeky asking, but would you review this for me? It's Other Fiction. I will return the favour.
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Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:08 pm
asxz says...



Hi, Demeter! Could you please review these for me?
Prologue, Part 1
Prologue, Part 2
Prologue, Part 3.

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Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:41 pm
Galerius says...



Hello, I would appreciate it if you critiqued my newest poem: topic43953.html

Please be harsh, I beg of you.
  





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Sat Mar 07, 2009 12:46 am
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Could you possibly review this for me, Demi? :D I will most definitely return the favour, just remember to bug me about it. xD
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Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:33 am
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Of course!

I have still asxz's number three and Galerius' to do, and I'll be away the whole day, but I'll get to them soon!
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Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:29 pm
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All done.

No line... *nudge nudge*
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Wed Mar 11, 2009 7:19 pm
Twit says...



The Kingdom is Departed [1]

First chapter, please? :D It's ALTERNATE HISTORY.

*hides*
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Thu Mar 12, 2009 2:23 am
Clo says...



Hey Dem--

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With a cherry on top! :D
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