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Wed Aug 25, 2010 12:48 am
Rascalover says...



Anyone?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Wed Aug 25, 2010 6:14 pm
captain.classy says...



Hey! Want to review this for me? I'll love you forever.

post755951.html#p755951

Please and thank you.
  





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Sun Aug 29, 2010 7:19 pm
Rascalover says...



All done :)

Who's next? :smt032
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:42 pm
Rascalover says...



bump
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:47 pm
austenite says...



Me maybe? post758014.html#p758014 or perhaps topic67412.html
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
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Wed Sep 01, 2010 8:34 pm
Rascalover says...



All done who's next :) ???
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Thu Sep 02, 2010 7:43 pm
HomelessPorcupine says...



Here's one!
Spoiler! :
Despite what it may seem like, it is realistic fiction.


I read that you enjoyed critiquing realistic more than fantasy, so just thought that I would give you that spoiler! I'm trying to keep it a bit hush hushed so that it will shock some people. Muhaha! 8)

Please and thank you!! :D

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"I can't afford a teddy bear, so I sleep with this contact solution."


Taran: He will not succeed in this. Somehow, we must find a way to escape. We dare not lose hope.

Fflewddur: I agree absolutely, your general idea is excellent; it's only the details that are lacking.
  





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Tue Sep 14, 2010 11:02 pm
Rascalover says...



Awesome :)
Hope it helped.

Who's next????
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Tue Sep 21, 2010 11:11 pm
Rascalover says...



Anyone??
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:48 am
SilentRain says...



Hello! This is a poem, topic69750.html

Thanks for reviewing

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Thu Sep 23, 2010 4:52 pm
Maki-Chan says...



oh! What about lyrics?
check out my deviantart account ^_^
http://maki121.deviantart.com/
  





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Thu Sep 23, 2010 6:15 pm
Rascalover says...



yes i do review lyrics :)
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 6:20 pm
Rascalover says...



all done
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sat Sep 25, 2010 4:47 am
blackbird12 says...



Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

topic69876.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
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Sun Sep 26, 2010 5:59 pm
Roal says...



Hey there! Mind if you review this non-fiction for me? Thanks in advance! :]
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14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.
  








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