"2-4-6-8! I like to delegate!" -Meshugenah "Teague: Stomping on your dreams since 1992." -Sachiko "So I'm looking at FLT and am reminded of a sandwich." -Jabber
Oh, Lisa, you and your stories: Bart's a vampire, beer kills brain cells. Now let's go back to that... building... thingie... where our beds and TV... is. --Homer Simpson
Onceuponatime, the idea is to critique a piece of work by the person above you and then post the link. Instead you seem to have given a very short critique on the same piece as the person above you and posted a link to your own story...
Tell you what, I'll do one for each. Give me a moment...
It's like everyone tells a story about themselves inside their own head. Always. All the time. That story makes you what you are. We build ourselves out of that story. — Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind
Well, I hope I am doing this right then...
