Deanie's Reviewing Business

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I'm don't hang in the forums much at all, so I didn't even know this existed until a few days ago! But I'm happy to do it! I'll try to get to the review as soon as possible, but it really depends how busy I am in real life. Could take minutes, hours or days (hopefully not weeks)

Okay, so I'll pretty much review anything literature related except fanfiction. Short stories, novel chapters, poems, essays, articles, scripts... fire it all at me!

Also for novel chapters. It's not required but for my sake please included a bit of a plot summary. I don't mind if it isn't attached to the post; you could just include it here with the request or put it on my wall - even a message in chat would be enough.

Thank you <3 Now request away!
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Hey there, Deanie, would you mind checking out the first chapter of my novel for me?

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

Please and thank you!
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Hey. :) Would you mind checking out the first chapter of my novel?

​Chapter one

Please and Thank you!




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Run away, Ray

it's not much, but I'd appreciate some thoughts 0.o thanks a lot!




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Carnival of Monsters
I'd love a review on my new short story :)

And maybe a couple of comments on the same story on my blog site, if you have time?
http://theagwilliams.webs.com/sample




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Cyberpunk Fantasy, part one

plot summary: DSP Section 6 is running security on the GRUR summit in Germany. The team must use their wit and advanced technology to defeat them and ascertain their purpose.
hor·ren·dous
adjective: shockingly dreadful; horrible
synonyms: appalling, frightful, hideous

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Hello Deanie, I have been reading your awesome reviews since a long time, could you please help me with my novel 'The Perfect Thief' Currently it has a prologue and two chapters [First chapter has been revised] and I'm going to post the third chapter very soon. Thanks :)

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I will get to it tonight! @Guarav009 :)
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Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014
Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015
Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015




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I Believe In The Dog Poo Fairy.
*waves*
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?




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I will get to it tomorrow for review day Fiend!
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Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014
Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015
Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015




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Hi Deanie, here to put a little request up.
I have a novel with 6 chapters up so far called Imaginary Friends. Here's a link to the first part...
Part 1: Mercy

Basically, it's about a girl called Layla with a sort of split personality. She may well be crazy, that's up to you to decide. There are characters that believe she's insane.
You cannot train yourself to notice,
To feel pain, and swallow fear




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Hey, Deanie. Traunt here to ask if you could possibly review a short novel chapter for me please:
Truant: Chapter Seven (Part 1/3)
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Bella - I have some chapters of current novels I am following to catch up on, but I will get to it as soon as.

Traunt - I hope the review isn't needed urgently? I would love to take the time to read the previous chapters as well, if that is alright with you?
Trust in God and all else follows.

Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014
Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015
Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015




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No, its fine, Deanie ;) I can wait.
Thank you! It would be nice if you could take a look at the other chapters, I would appreciate it. It's fine with me. In fact, that's great!
You're such an awesome reviewer <3
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Whoa, you've got, like, a WRFF thread and everything.

Look what I did.

It got a bit long, but I couldn't find a good place to end before this. xD Thank you~

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