Shino's Review Emporium (Open)

Welcome to Paracosm's Review Emporium! I am willing to do a review on any of the following:

Novel Chapters (Any)
Poetry
Short Stories
Non-Fiction

I prefer to read fantasy, sci-fi, mystery, horror, suspense, or literary fiction. I might read romance, or historical fiction. I absolutely do not review writing that is formatted in a giant, huge, obnoxious block. I will gladly review it once it has been broken into pretty little paragraphs, even if the paragraphing is wrong, because I can help with that. I also do not read anything that hasn't been punctuated. Again, the punctuation can be wrong, but I will not read chatspeak or text like this:

silver sequins glittered before his eyes he was dazzled by the dress that hung beautifully over her slender figure

Please format your writing. Thank you!

Please do not post for a request if there are five or more unfulfilled requests, thank you!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=101321#c359205

A little prose piece I wrote, would love a review! Just as warning, it's all broken into nice paragraphs, but some of the inner quote formatting and language is intentionally broken for effect. I am aware of how to use quotes and stuff.

Thanks!

There ya go, Tori! I hope it helps.

Here's a short story that I'd be very grateful if you reviewed it

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=101327

Done, CM!

First chapter that I'd love a review on! work.php?id=101411

Hi there, could you review my piece, "A Dandelion and a Meadow" ? work.php?id=101674

Thanks in advance

Awesome! I'll get to these soon!

could you review this for me please?

Notes on an execution:the ritual Killing of Postmodern Literature Is a Three-Man Gunfight at the O.K. Corral (Allegorically Speaking)

Hello!

I have a novel with three chapters. I only request a single review, although I would adore for life a reading of all of them, but I have posted the link to the first chapter since that would probably be the best starting place. It is mostly mystery/suspense, but there is a little bit of fantasy stuck around in it. Hope you review it, and thanks in advance!

Disaster Zone: Chapter One: Some Girl

Finally getting to it Dhendon!

Hello! I just finished my poem, and wold love to get a review from you!

Undisclosed(edited)