"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
From the ashes a fire shall be woken, A light from the shadows shall spring; Renewed shall be blade that was broken, The crownless again shall be king.
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
From the ashes a fire shall be woken, A light from the shadows shall spring; Renewed shall be blade that was broken, The crownless again shall be king.
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Hello i was wondering if you guys could review my first chapter of my novel. i really need some professional advice, so it would be great if you guys could review it. thank in advance. work.php?id=99215
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
I hope it's not too hard to read, I wasn't able to format it the way I usually like for some reason. I'm not too sure about this chapter, but I'd love to know what you think about it! Thanks for your help!
When I was young I used to have problems finishing my sentences, but now I
I have a fantasy piece that is the opening into a setting and set of characters that I hope to expand on with more short stories. It contains girls slaying dragons without being skanky about it, she actually slays the thing without losing all her clothes, as some horrible so-called "artists" like to portray. So please, enjoy and tell me what you think about the story itself (I am not that good with grammar and punctuation and all that jazz, only coming up with ideas). work.php?id=99851 Please enjoy, or at least pretend in front of my face you did!
Yay! I finally remembered to update my thread and say that I'm caught up.
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Huh? Well, do ya? Do ya? 
