Bottle of Red Ink

Hi! Here's another willing reviewer I'll pretty much review anything - EXCEPT lyrics and scripts, don't know enough about writing those to feel confident in giving advice Anything else goes, so post some links below and I'll get on it right away

Oh, I tend to do line-by-line reviews, so quite detailed. If you want a more overall critique instead just let me know, otherwise be prepared for a lot of nitpicking

~Ink

Could you look at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93532 please? It's kind of in the middle of the story, sorry....it's for an OCT, which is kind of like competitive storybooking. XD Because I've mostly been drawing comics for the contest, my writing has really suffered. I'd appreciate your help!! <3

Thanks so much for posting here! It's really awesome of you! <3

Done, Volant Open for more requests people, don't be shy!

could you review part one of my new short story?
work.php?id=93605

Done, psudiname Anyone else?

Yes, please!! I have an essay that needs some nitpicky love. work.php?id=93653
Please and thanks and love!
Xyra Pekkala

Hi Xyra, your essay has been read Open for more requests!

Could you please review this?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93524

Done, emilybrodo! Next please

work.php?id=93845
Hi! This is a fanfiction, based off the seires Sisters Grimm. Thanks deary!
If you have something you need reviewed in return, just drop me a line!

So here's something I posted and I am eagerly awaiting a review....
work.php?id=93858
Please

Done for both of you, Spark and jem! C'mon people, request away!