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Bella-

I nodded and walked inside the hut. I looked at the girl. "It's going to be alright. We'll help you in anyway we can." I smiled and looked at the guy, and motioned him to go outside. "The princess is waiting."
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Baltazar Drake | His hut

I didn't move a muscle. "I'm not coming out. Not after hearing her call me a filthy half breed. Creatures like me have feelings too and she should know better than to insult me. Especially when the female on my bed is like me and wounded. I don't care if the princess is waiting for me outside. I'm deeply insulted and not stupid enough to know better than to let what she called me slid so easily." I growled deeply to enforce my fury. "A dragon, half breed or not, deserves just as much respect as royalty."
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Bella-

I nodded. I kinda Agreed with him. "I understand. I would feel the same way, and I know you have feelings, and I know how you feel. I just don't want to get introuble here." I smiled. "Just go out there for me."
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(Wait...question...Pixie, aren't you evil, and isn't Stella good? Second, is this hut in the forest? If not, Pixie shouldn't have been able to get in...Please explain.)
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I'm backstabbing Bella (pixie) when she goes in and Baltazar out I will set the hut on fire and stop Baltazar from saving his girlfriend. I think the hut has to because Cinderwitch is evil
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(and one more thing, can we have a discussion in the DT about what will happen next because I have a feeling not everyone is on the same page and so everyone can have a say in what's happening)
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Baltazar's hut's a little bit close to town, but also close to the forest since his mother's kind of dragon are forest-dwellers. And Pixie, his door was locked so Belle shouldn't have gotten in.
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(I agree with Stella, can we discuss this in the DT, since we're all online? It would help)
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[spoiler]Please?????? With cherries on tops???? This happened to the Challenge of the forest and no one posts there anymore.. :| /spoiler]
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Cinderwitch \ Baltazar's hut
The woman tried to get the man to go outside, but he flat out refused to go. "A dragon, half breed or not, deserves just as much respect as royalty," said the man. Cinderwitch was starting to respect him.
"Just go out there for me," said the woman, using precisely the same tactics as Cinderwitch liked to.
Cinderwitch put her hand on the man's shoulder to get his attention. "That princess is a liar. I'm no criminal. You shouldn't trust her - um, what's your name, friend?"
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Baltazar Drake | His Hut

I looked at the wounded Dragonborn. She was awake and didn't know my name. I took her hand. "Baltazar. My name is Baltazar. I'm half forest dragon." I turned my attention to the intruder. "Get out of my hut before I throw another tantrum. Just because I'm half dragon, doesn't mean I can't throw a tantrum like a purebred dragon. You better get out and tell the princess I won't leave until I get an apology for being called a filthy half breed. I have my privacy rights and deserve respect regardless of my social class." I wasn't as dumb as Aayta took me for. I may be a male, but I was never that kind of male who plays the fool.
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where would a villians layer be we dont have one do we where are all the evil people
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(You didn't use any punctuation there. Epic fail, LOL :P )
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Cinderwitch | Baltazar's hut
"I know," Cinderwitch said, "Some people just don't understand the respect dragons deserve, even half-dragons." She squeezed his hand gently. "Don't you feel like teaching them a lesson? Nothing that would kill them or anything, but I know the dragon in you has far more power than say, your average princess." Cinder smiled disarmingly. If she could convince this guy to get Aatya out of the way, she was one step closer to getting that gold.
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Baltazar Drake | His Hut

Although I wanted to throw another tantrum to show the extend of my dragon half, I was too modest to do it. I knew Aayta might be outside the door where I pushed her, but she didn't know I had a few tricks up my sleeve. I took the wounded Dragonborn from my bed and opened a trapdoor. I climbed down carefully. "Take the left path. If I'm right, the princess might try to burn the place down the minute I'm out of there. The left path leads to the forest. Don't ever start flying until that wing of yours is fully healed." Without even thinking, I kissed her on the lips. "I'll hope to see you again, if we ever cross paths again." As she stood there stunned, I closed the trapdoor and ran through the right path where my father's hut was. If Aayta was to burn down my hut, she won't take me or the female Dragonborn with it. At least I had myself a back-up plan.
Look down and show some mercy if you can.
Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.

~~~Les Miserables



For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein