Rogues and Pets vs. Dolls [closed/starting]

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Davnick

I start pounding on the inside of Poca's mouth, stomping on her tongue, and try to pull out her teeth. Anything I can do to try to get me out oh her mouth, I try.

"LET ME OUT OF HERE RIGHT NOW!!!" I scream, my voice cracking from the stress I've put on it in the las two minutes. I'd thought I was going to get out of here when I'd gotten Poca's mouth open, but then it seems she was playing with me. She'd used just a bit more pressure and snapped her jaw shut. When I get out of here, I swear I'm going to-

Ah ah ah! Watch your... language-Dark.. Rogue! She growls out loud, nearly blowing out my ear drums in the process. Cursing...makes-me want-to...swallow. She wiggles her tongue for emphasis, and I loose my footing, landing on my backside.

"Poca!" I scream, trying not to focus on the saliva I am now coated with. "Let me out NOW!!"

She chuckles deep in her throat, again sending pain through my ears. Or what? Before I can respond, I feel her mouth twist upward. I realize that she must be making some kind of funny face.

What in the world? I think.

Oh-gross! When was-the...last time-you bathed, Dark Rogue? She says in a shuddering voice.

An idea begins to form in my head. Prepare to spit me out Poca. I think to myself. "Uh, I don't know." I say uncertianly, scratching my arms and head. I try to scrape as much dirt onto her tongue as possible. "Maybe... six months?" It was a total lie, but if it got me out of here, I didn't care what the others thought about my bathing habits.

Are-you serious?! That-is...just disgusting! Ohhh... I think-I'm going-to puke...

I freeze. "No!" I shout. I hear a wet gurgle coming from the back of Poca's throat. "No! You aren't supposed to puke! You're supposed to-!" Poca's mouth is flooded with.... Oh no... I think. I can't help myself. I scream, both mentally and physically.

"AAAAHHHHHHHRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGLLLLLLLLEEEEE!!!!!! I scream, my throat ripping raw. I clamp my mouth and eyes shut, only to realize I now had no air left in my lungs. I clamp a hand over my nose to keep the foul-smelling semi-liquid from entering ANY part of my body. I fell my lungs start to burn, and so I begin screaming in my head. MAKE HER SPIT IT OUT, MAKE HER SPIT IT OUT, MAKE HER SPIT IT FREAKING OUT!!!!!

I hear Everlee's mental shout. Spit him out Poca!!

Oh thank you, thank you! I shout to her. Did I ever tell you how much I love you Everlee? Because it's a lot. I can feel her blush through her mind.

Gee, thanks Davnick. Now SPIT HIM OUT!! She commands.

NOO!! Sheara shouts. Don't spit it out Poca!!

WHAT!? Everlee and I shout at the same time. My vision is getting blurry, and my lungs feel like they're going to burst. WHY THE HE- Poca slams me against the roof of her mouth with her tongue.

NO CURSING!! She bellows.

Because! Sheara shouts, desperately. Poca's uh... throw up... when she's this size.... will flood this whole clearing! And it gives whoever touches it a horrible red rash and dyes their hair pink till they wash it out!!

...WHAT NOW!?! I shout with the last of my mental power. The world inside Poca's mouth his growing fuzzy and black around the edges.

Okay, Poca! Sheara shouts. You need to swallow, without taking Davy with your... uh... stuff! So, get him somewhere safe! I feel Poca's tongue probing me. All of a sudden, she crushes me into her cheek. I feel the skin mold around me, and I get an image of a Davnick-imprint visible to the people watching. The warm liquid around me disappears and Poca relaxes her tongue. I drop back to the floor of her mouth, sputtering and gasping for air.

As life flows into my lings, an itching, burning feeling spreads along my skin. I look down to see large red blotches forming along the skin that's visible at the moment. I can feel the itch spreading under my clothing, and I can't help but start to itch. I feel anger and irritation well up inside me.

Davy? Are you okay? I hear Sheara's timid voice asks. I'm too angry to respond.

Davnick? This voice makes me stop short. Seena. I think.

Horror and anger burst from me, much worse than before. It feels like poison is running through my veins. I can feel a large static charge building up inside me. I let the current run up and down my arms and across my back, tracing the line of my scar. I step to the front of Poca's mouth. She grins, and I can suddenly see the outside world through the bars of her teeth.

What are-you going... to do- Dark Rogue?

I don't respond out loud, just grab one of her bottom canines in heach hand, and pump as much electricity into her as I am able.

(And now, for Seena's dramatic "death" scene!! Take it away!!)
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Everlee

What are-you going... to do- Dark Rogue? Poca challenges, clearly thinking she's winning.

Poca's asking for it, Darren says beside me, blocking out the rest of the group.

Poca, please spit... I say, but I didn't get to finish my sentance. A small shiver passes quickly through Poca. She spreads her legs out as if she were about to lose her balance and he tail sticks straight out behind her. Slowly, her fur begins to stand on end, making her look at least twice her size.

Ow, she says with a small laugh and smile. That one... actually... hurt, Dark... Rogue.

"Davnick?!" Seena shouts. I look over to her and see Tige out of his weapon form. Seena takes a deep breath and takes a step foward. "Poca, please," she says calmly, putting her hands up to try to keep Poca calm. "Can I please have Davnick back?" she asks.

Seena takes another step forward, still far away from the giant white fox. "Please, spit out..." Seena begins to say, but she's cut off.

From Poca's fur, a visible purple-ish blue electric bolt flies to Seena, sending shock waves through her entire frame. Her body gets thrown back, hitting a tree. The tree makes a loud snapping noise as Seena's body falls to the ground. We stare in astonishment for what seems like forever.

Poca is the first to recover. She moves her head to the side and quickly spits Davnick out on the ground in a pile of saliva and vomit.

Davnick gets up slowly, trying to wash himself off. "Thanks Poca," he says sarcastically. "I really..." he stops mid sentance as his eyes flash over to Seena's limp body.

Before I know what's happening, I'm running towards Seena, Davnick right behind me. I slide to the ground, careful not to touch her.

"Seena!" Davnick shouts next to me.

I reach forward and put my fingers to Seena's neck. A shock runs through my body and my arm reflexively moves back. I push it forward.

I'm not going to let her die! I shout, my fingers finding no pulse. No! She can't die! Not yet!

"Seena!" Davnick shouts again.

(Sorry it's so short. I wanted to keep going, but I wasn't sure how Razzle and Blonde wanted it exactly. Tell me if I need to change anything! :D )
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Rayden Thorn:

"Rayden?" Reva asked cautiously, as she tended to my cuts.

"Yes?" I said trying not to think about her sitting so close to me- or her fingers gently touching my back

"Back there, before Darsor attacked you..." she trailed off. I wondered where she was going with what she was saying.

is she angry? I tried to turn my head but this pulled at my injures. she fell silent and there was a very long, and very awkward pause.

"Yeah?" I said trying to prompt her, what was she going to ask?

"Well, not that it was embarrassing or anything, because I'm a monster and monsters don't get embarrassed, but I was curious and I have a question. And I just don't understand and now I'm rambling, and this is dumb but hear me out."

She said in a rush, mumbling quite adorably. I tried not to snicker.

"Were you actually going to kiss me?" she said at last flatly, no emotion in her voice. I froze, what was I going to tell her? What did she want to hear?

I rubbed the back of my head sheepishly and laughed.

"Well no, I was just joking- trying to see what you would do." I wait for her response for what seems like forever.

Oh lord what have I done now?

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"Well no, I was just joking- trying to see what you would do." He said, and I kinda felt... Upset. But that didn't make any sense because there was no way I was interested in him. So I shoved those feelings aside and hid them away where Darsor wouldn't be able to see them. They didn't make any sense anyway.

See? He wasn't even going to do anything in the first place Darsor. I said quickly, and devoid of any emotion but triumph.

Well tell that fire rogue that I- He proceeded to say the single most rude and inappropriate comment that I had ever heard come from his mouth.

"Darsor!" I murmured in shock, tying up the bandage on Rayden's back and moving on to his shoulder. "That was out of line! I mean really!"

"What did he say?" Rayden asked, and I realized that I had been speaking aloud.

My hands stopped wrapping his shoulder as I decided what to say. "Uh... Well..."
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Rayden Thorn:

"What did he say?" I asked after the horrified gasp Reva had given and the half hushed

"Dasor!" she had hissed out loud. she had finished tying up my back and slowly scooted around to my side to work on my shoulder.

"Well?" I said, I was honestly curious what her pet had said about me, and it changed the subject. I watched her unable not too. My chest was tight, and all my nerves were on edge having her so close to me.

Lord Rayden how old are you, fourteen!? the practical side of me shouted to the other half. your twenty! A man for heavens sake, being close to a woman shouldn't bother you like this! I swallowed.

"Well... uh..." she said staring fixedly at my shoulder, not meeting my eyes. "Well Dasor said...." she met my eyes then, my throat went dry and my breath hitched.

"Rayden would you just kiss her!? Dante shouted at me form his perch in the trees, but I hardly heard him.

Her eyes- god, it's like I'm drowning in them. Her eyes were like the sea after a storm, that unnameable blue green, naturally stunning.

Then suddenly, my left hand was buried in her hair at the back of her head and I had brought my lips to hers. My other hand found its way to her cheek and I cradled her face in my hands.

The Hell was I doing?! I wasn't like this! I didn't kiss women I hardly knew, I hadn't never wanted to kiss someone like this before!

Without thinking, I pulled her around gently, so she was fully facing me. My one hand was still tangled in her hair, the other around her waist, holding her tightly.

If Dasor tried to kill me for thinking of kissing her what is he going to do now? I thought, but then realized- I didn't care.

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(So needless too say Rayden (and myself) have lost all self control! :D Bee if you don't like this I will of course edit! also I was hoping you'd leave his "after the kiss" reaction to me, I have an idea)
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(0.0 I didn't see that coming! And of course it's ok Shady! And by 'his after kiss reaction' Rayden's or Darsor's?)

Reva

I was trying to come up with a lie for what Darsor said, and then Rayden turned and looked at me. Our eyes caught and I stopped breathing for a second. Blue. Those are the bluest eyes I have ever seen. Jeez, did he have to be so very attractive? I mean, why couldn't Rayden Thorn the fire rogue that my pet hated be an average, not handsome guy? Did he really have to tempt me? His gaze wasn't something I could look away from and ever so slightly, I felt myself be drawn to him.

Reva, walk away. Darsor hissed, I could feel him getting on edge, but I really didn't care. I was hardly paying him any attention.

And then, in the split second that my attention was a tiny bit diverted, Rayden grabbed me by the back of the head and pressed his lips to mine. It was right about then my mind stopped working. I could hear Darsor yelling at me, telling me to get away from the filthy fire rogue before I was contaminated, but I was busy being both shocked and over the moon happy.

His hand slipped around my waist and he pulled me a little closer. Involuntarily, my hands wrapped around him, one running across his shoulder and up into his hair and the other around his neck. And then I was lost in his arms. As wrong as I knew it was, everything about him was so familiar.
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Rayden Thorn:

Her hands slowly slid up my arms, over my shoulders and buried themselves in my hair, her fingers raking through it.

I kept asking myself. Why do I feel like I've known her forever?

I tightened my grip on her small frame and lost myself to her- everything: The feel of her in my arms, her fingers playing with my hair, even her smell- something wild and completely intoxicating. Why does this feel so right?


I really don't know how long we were there, and I don't know which one of us eventually broke the kiss for lack of air. But when I sat there breathing heavily looking into her flushed face, the reality of what I had just done to her hit me like a tone of bricks.

I pulled back sharply and scrambled to my feet as quickly as I could.

"Reva I'm so sorry!" I said wishing I could take it all back. What had I done to her? she was barely older than my sister!

A look of shock, confusion, and hurt played over her beautiful face as she still knelt there looking up at me.

What have I done? then a truly terrible thought crossed my mind. Oh god, what if that was her first kiss!?

"Reva, I- I'm so- I don't know- I'm sorry." I wanted to walk away, but I couldn't do that, I didn't run from my mistakes.

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(Alrigt Bee, now rayden felt a connection to Reva, but he thinks what he did was wrong- taking advantage of her (in his mind) whatever Reva decides is up to you! :D)
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Reva

The kiss ended, and yet I was still in his arms. His warm, strong arms. And then I was on the ground and he was several feet away. For a moment I was just frozen, confused. How did that all happen?

"Reva, I'm so sorry!" He exclaimed, several feet away and standing. Was he going to kiss me and run?

That's the thing about fire rogues, they are horrible like that. Darsor said in my mind.

I ignored him, and I think he realized that his commentary was neither wanted nor appreciated.

"Reva, I- I'm so- I don't know- I'm sorry." Rayden repeated and I looked up at him.

Was he sorry for having kissed me? Sorry because he didn't mean it? Sorry because he was just messing with me again and when he realized that I was actually a little bit interested, he freaked out? All those plausible answers came out in one word. "Why?" I asked, still a bit numb. I touched my lips gently, just to make sure it wasn't some sort of twisted dream. I felt my touch, which was good news, because I seemed to still be in shock. "Why are you sorry Rayden?" I asked softly, but my voice was gradually becoming louder as my anger mounted. I let myself be kissed by a fire rogue, my first kiss! And he apologises?! I shook my head in disbelief when he didn't answer, just stared at me in horror. I really am a monster. Why else would he be sorry for kissing me?

Because he's a fire rogue. They are naturally evil.

Shut up Darsor, I can handle this.
I hissed, then sent a guilty feeling. Just because I was mad at Rayden right now did not give me leave to be mad at him for this. I slowly stood and looked Rayden in the eye. "Are you sorry because you didn't mean it? Sorry that you kissed a monster, and you wish you could take it all back." He flinched and I let out a mirthless laugh. "Unbelieveable. For one half of a second, I felt like maybe someone other than my pet could like me, me! I should have suspected from the beginning that you were not interested in me in that way! But no, I thought 'maybe someone will see that I'm trying to change. That I'm trying to become better!' And then you go and apologise. Congratulations Rayden Thorn, you got me to feel something, and it sucks!" By the end I was bellowing and immediately after I turned invisible and walked away, moving as silently as ever.
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(hope I'm not messing any plans up! I can rewrite if anyone needs me to, don't hesitate to ask!)

"So what's your answer?"

"Go with you of course! You guys need me! Jeez, I'm not one to wait around for the government to find me frozen to a tree!...I'm not stupid!"

I watched the interaction between the other doll and Everlee take place. The tiger-thing scared and me I didn't want to get to close while it was still so near this tree-bound boy. But I think he could help. The way he talked it seemed as if he simply wanted to agree to any thing, just to get free. Perhaps I could like him.

A battle of sorts had broken out on the ground as Everlee was releasing the doll. Poca eating and then vomiting Davie-boy, I watched as Sheara cut through a tree trunk with an electric whip. I gasped, maybe I would need a second plan. She was still so sweet and innocent, but a heck of a lot less vulnerable. Stupid Davie. As another rogue was thrown back by a bolt of electricity from the pet I watched Everlee run to her, Sheara looking stricken with horror. Davie-boy on the ground in a pile of vomit. I laughed. Serves him right.

I slid back down the tree to the doll slowly and deliberately pulling himself out of his prison. I sat against a tree, trying to seem uninterested for the moment. Letting my eyes drift over the battle with a smile.

But I continued to watched from the corner of my eye as he pulled himself free from his prison. "What brings you here?" I called out attempting to be nonchalant. I smiled and let my eyes begin to wander again.
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Alec

I looked at the blonde girl. She was small, small enough that she didn't seem to pose a threat. I rubbed my freezing cold wrists and sat up, stretching my back. "What brings me here?" I repeated. "Everlee. Davnick. The Invisible Rogue. Rayden Thorn." I told her. "They have enormous bounties on their heads, what else would bring me here? Looks like that's all going to be changing though. If you can't win, change sides, I always say. What brings you here?"
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I knew I had to be careful. Reva is invisible now. Angry at her little boyfriend. I smiled. Did he actually want to change sides, just as easy as that? Just give up and form a bond with the rest of these twats simply because--if ya can't beat 'em, join 'em? Was this his attitude. I scoffed. Maybe he wouldn't be useful to me. I looked around briskly to make sure no looking. Though I would not know if Reva was.

"I wanted to find them. I wanted to, avenge my mother." I said. Leaving it all up to interpretation. If one was smart then they could possibly discern I mean kill a member of the camp to avenge her. Or maybe I wanted to fight with them to avenge her. I stepped closer to him. Walking slowly. "You, you're just going to flip sides, just like that. Big bounty hunter like yourself?" I asked eyebrows lowered slightly.
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Alec

I grinned, cat-like at her. "I don't know. Am I that type of bounty hunter?" I asked, wondering if she was as smart as I was giving her credit for. She acted like an innocent girl, but she seemed to me to be a little more calculating than she pretended to be. I admit, I was going to travel with them, but I wasn't frightened of that disappearing rogue. I would have no problem turning them in, because even if she killed me, I would die a rich man.

(Sorry it's so short, I'm not gonna lie, I don't really identify with Alec, so he's hard for me to write)
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Niyah smiled softly to herself. Seena was wonderful, she decided. She was funney, and kind, and spirited. Just the kind of person niyah would want to befriend.
I'm glad your happy. Eisen murmered. Niyah laughed.
"Why?"
I was worried youd still be, distressed...
Niyah's laughter died in her throat. She lyed down, allowing herself to flop onto the dirt and leaves, cureling up into a ball. She squeezed her eyes shut, listening to the distant sound of thunder and feeling the cool mist against her bare flesh.
Niyah, i'm sorrey. I didn't think.
It's not your fault. Niyah replied. She tried to stay strong, tried to hold back the flood of memories and tears that threatened to ovewhelm her.
And thats when she heard the scream.
Another flash of pain went through her, and she bit back the scream with all her might. Raphael moaned too. He could feel it just as clearly as she could.
Niyah's body beat against the cold metal table she was strapped too, then fell still. Her eyes began to close as she fell into oblivion.
"Don't let the girl become unconscious. We need her awake." The man in white said, just as niyah's eyes shut completely. Something hot flashed across her skin, bubbling on her bare flesh. She immanently sat up, screaming in agony. Raphael began to scream too.
Niyah had endured this every week for as long as she could remember. The people in white would come and take them into the shadows, into the dark room where Niyah, her sister, and Raphael were striped and strapped to metal tables.
"That's enough for one night." the doctor said after more electric flashes. "We can't have them dying on us before the research is over, we might never get another chance like this." Niyah's head fell to the side; she no longer had the energy to hold it up. The little girl, closed her eyes, a single tear dripping down her cheek and onto the table. The last thing she saw was her reflection, a girl of no more than five, hidden by burned flesh and wire.

The first thing she realized was that she was screaming. The second was that she wasn't alone.
"Hey, wake up! Are you alright?" A handsome young man asked. Niyah gazed up at him, her entire body still burning with unimaginable pain. She realized that she'd seen him before... Alec. The man Everlee and the others had caught on the same day they had taken her in. Alec. A hunter, like Lydia. He KILLED her kind.
Niyah was upon her feet, quickly turning away.
"I'm fine." she said, trying to keep her words cold. Her voice cracked. She really needed to get better at that. The forest filled with an uncomfortable silence as Niyah waited for Alec's reply. She turned, meeting his gaze again. His eyes were dark as coal's the kind of black you only found at the deepest parts of the ocean, or at the dead of night.For a moment, Niyah found herself unable to breath.
'Good. And next time, try not to scream in your sleep. It's annoying." And with that, he turned and walked away.

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Jared:

I went in for another blow to Tess, but she dodged easily. I was about to go for it again when I heard a scream. I turned towards the noise and out of the corner of my eye saw Tess do the same. We were silent for a moment.

"Do you think that maybe we should-" I saw a flash of light as she brought her sword down next to me. I jumped sideways
quickly, doing as much as I could to stay on the branch.

I failed.

I began falling to the ground, hitting every branch, it seemed. I hit the forest floor with a thud and heard Tess laughing.

"Hey! That's cheating! You could've killed me!" I shouted up.

"Sorry.' She said through her hysterics.

I stared at her blankly. "Why'd you say sorry?"

She jumped down gracefully and landed almost silent. Other than her laughing. "I just thought of a joke."

I raised an eyebrow. "What is it?"

SHe tried to calm down. "You fell down the stupid tree and hit every branch on the way down!" She burst into more hysterics, but I didn't get it. She realized I wasn't laughing and her smile dimmed. "You are such an idiot. It must have been to sophisticated for you." She laughed some more and began to walk away. "Let's go see what that scream was."

I shrugged and followed. Then i almost screamed.

Suddenly her face was right in mine with a huge smile spread across it. "I win." Sh giggled again and disappeared into the brush.

Honestly. I thought and began walking again. Winning is like candy to her.
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