I agree with MeanMrMustard and BehindTheMask here. The rhymes are forced, the spoilers are damn unnecissary (excuse my french) and the viewpoint is notonly offensivly controversial but moot point. Whoo hoo, you think booty shorts suck. Great for you. I know we have freedom of speech but is there really a point to this poem? Im especially not fond of your comments on things like cellulite aand dry skin. Who are you to judge? I bet you got yourself some cellulite and dry skin to. I mean, this isnt even about hating booty shorts. This is about hating those who wear them. So what? Are YOU the one wearing them? Get over it. Hate to say it, but i know women who use booty shorts for buisness. To make a freaking living. You know othat is? Hookers, strippers, and prostitutes. And you cant judge them either. Some women are forced to do it, and if they dojt make the money they get beat. All in all, your poem was shallow. Lacking. Certainly not insightful. And the rhyming is way to forced, which emphadises the blunt flatness. Soorrrrry. I hate it.
And who are you to make a poem based entirely on opinion then tell us we cant put our own? Sounds downright hypocritical.
