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Arthur Jameston


I knew what Nila was up to. She needed me to give Azure some retribution. I mixed ingredient after ingredient in my cauldron, holding my silence as I did my work. The smell was disgusting and the color was sickening. I grinned. Nanna always told me that when it comes to potions for pranks, the grosser the better. I made a lot of gross potions before, but none of them were as gross as this one. I added water to keep it thin, since a harmful potion is very thick while harmless potions were thin. The potion's smell was completely disgusting, so terrible I almost gagged. It wasn't the smell of the potion when it's made that I worry about, it was the aftermath that worried me. The aftersmell was always the killer, but also unpredictable.
After I bottled it up, I showed it to Nila. "Wait until she drinks it with Ashe. That's where the fun really begins."
Look down and show some mercy if you can.
Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.

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Name: Zytren Syrosha

Age: 18

Appearance: Black hair with purple streaks in his hair and blue eyes, scar over his right eye, 5 foot 11, pale skin with tattos all over his body but his face.

History: He grew up as an orphan on the streets a bad guy that no one ever wanted to help or ever be near a lone wolf. He disscovered his ability one day while stealing from a jewelry store. When the cops arrested him they pointed him toward this institute to change his live. He also new cat from seeing her around and almosted jumped her but chose not to because of another girl that was richer.

Strengths:Atheltic, flexible,and really good hearing

Flaws: Loves to kill and loves blood, cant see from his right eye well because of the scar, and is a pyro.

Psychic abilities: Can change his anatomy to use animal traits and abilities.

Medical Issues: allergies

Up for love: Yay And Straight.

Others: 1. Can be found alone in the forest playing acustic guitar with the animals lisening to him. 2. His home is a shack near the lake
"Life is a game of chess, except I control the what happens Next and slowly lose the ones that we're never there in the first place" ~Zytrianna




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Cataluna Zara
I climbed up the tree and tucked my legs underneath me. I popped my earbuds in and hummed along with 'Tourniquet' by Evanescence. I closed my eyes and leaned my head against the tree letting the familiar lyrics bring a rush of memories.
"You are without a doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of."

"But you have heard of me."




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Zytren Syrosha
I sat underneath the tree and stared up at her like a shadow in the distance being quiet and lisening to the wind I didn't notice who she was until i started walking out "Is that you?" I asked her, "Have you been here all the time?" :shock:
Last edited by sianta1123 on Wed May 18, 2011 8:08 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"Life is a game of chess, except I control the what happens Next and slowly lose the ones that we're never there in the first place" ~Zytrianna




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Forgive our short posts we've both been really busy.
"You are without a doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of."

"But you have heard of me."




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Jake

I went into my tent for some early sleep. I needed some time to myself to think.It didnt take long for me to drift off to sleep.

I woke up in a forest next to a lake with a woman standing five feet infront of me. Her face hidden in mist.
"Jake,dear. she said below a whisper."You must learn to control the gift I have given you." She said a little louder. I tried to take a step forward but it was like I was frozen in place.

"Who are you?" I choked out .Trying to see her face.

"I am Mother Nature. I Gave you the power over nature now you must learn to use it. You must trust in your power or you will never be of use, to your new friend. She said.

The mist was moveing around her body Only her top half could be seen."How do I do that?" I said pleading for an answer.

"Only you can find the answer to that.".

I Jumped up not sure where I was going but i felt like going for a walk.






******He has power over nature/weather(like storm form Xmen.so he can flyand stuff.)




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Yea, thanks for keeping my in the guys. *Is a tad annoyed* Well, this is my official leave. Goodbye.
"Fantasy is a way of looking through the wrong end of the telescope."

"The writer who breeds more words than he needs is making a chore for the reader who reads!"

~Dr.Seuss.




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I'm kind of behind, if someone could bring me in I'd be eternally greatful.




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Cataluna Zara
I looked confusedly at the boy below the tree he looked familiar and also as if he'd seen the darker things in life. I jumped down and nearly landed on Allora. "AH!" She said surprised. "I am so sorry!" I exclaimed. She looked irritated and then stomped off I giggled embarassed then I turned to the boy who had adressed me. "You do look familiar and I suppose I have been here but where have you been?" I replied biting my lip. He smiled slightly and it made me blush slightly because it made his eyes light up and his face soften making him so much more handsome. "Everywhere and nowhere to the dark side of the tracks and to the light side." He replied playing along with my riddle game. I smiled. "My name's Cataluna call me Cat or Luna." I said instead of replying. "Zyrten Syrosha." He replied shaking my hand.
"You are without a doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of."

"But you have heard of me."




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Brooke:
they found out the teachers wanted to put collars on them, and asked Arthur's grandma and the goddess to protect them to a safe haven, the graveyard where Arthur's mother is buried. My character and Arthur have fallen in love, Arthur's grandmother is dying, Arthur is planning a prank.... I think that'll catch you up to speed. anyone else have anything to add?

Nila

The Tents were up, And we all jumbled into diffrent one, regardless of age or gender. Azure, Jake,Luna and I were all in the biggest tent. Arthur had crept away some time before, his eyes bright with excitment, Azure had been flirting with Ashe since dinner, Luna had crept off and so had Jake.

I went to my tent and grabbed my iPod and laptop, and ran off to the edge of the graveyard. there had to be some kind of nook for me to hide in. Here we go. between to Moslems. I climbed in the gap, and settled down, leaning against one of the buildings. I opened my laptop and plugged in my earbuds. not your birthday by Allstar Weekend began blasting out of the buds. My laptop had built in WIfi, but thats not what I wanted.
I pulled up my program called MyLife by ME. A journal program I had downloaded for free.

I wrote all that had happened, and how quickly I had fallen in love.

After writing, I saved it and closed my laptop. The dead leaves felt so soft, my fleece jacket so warm... For the first time, I didn't feel like crying myself to sleep. Changing my music to some slow classical, I curled up and went to sleep.
~
"Nila... Wake up." I sat up, and looked blearily around.
It was Luna.
"What?"
"Everyone is looking for you!"
"Who's everyone?"
"Arthur, Ashe and Azure."
"Oh... Tell them I'm asleep." I curled up and shivered,my fleece didn't feel as warm as it had awhile ago.
"Oh, just let em' keep searching, here wanna take this?" She held a blanket out to me, and I took it gratefully.
"Thanks."
"No problem." She leaned back and started bobbing her head and closing her eyes.
I pulled the blanket over me, and closed my eyes, falling asleep again....
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Ashe Breaker:

When Nila dissapeared it was the perfect chance to slip away and confirm something Ashe had suspected for a long time. Normally it was easy for him to track someone, he just had to use his powers and follow their scent trail. But tonight he didn't bother.

Ashe wandered over to a quiet part of the cemetery. He swore as he reached up and found a strange lump under his collar bone. Sighing Ashe tugged his shirt off and left it on the ground, this was going to be painful and bloody, he didn't need to ruin his shirt on top of it.

He reached up with nails turned to claws and dug into his flesh. Hissing as his nails dug around until he finally found what he was looking for. When he drew the bloody metal tracer out to see in the faint moonlight he snarled. "I knew it. I knew that bastard microchipped me."

Even his mother had never gone that far. Enraged, Ashe crushed the chip in his hands and turned to take off running. But stopped when he heard a gasp from behind him. Ashe turned to see Azure staring at him wide eyed. Idly Ashe wondered if it was his bloody collar bone, or the whip scars on his back that had startled her.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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Arthur Jameston
At his mother's grave


I took Nanna's pendant and wore it under my shirt with Mother's. I promised Nanna not to pursue my father, so I intend to keep that promise. Keeping myself invisible, I cried softly as I watched Nanna's body vanish. I murmured, "Good-bye, Nanna. Goddess be with you." I revealed both pendants and whispered to them, "You now are my stones. Lead me to the Family Incantus to finish what both your former masters have trained me for."
The pendants grew warm against my chest. I knew where to go. My destination was perhaps a solid three miles west of the cemetary. Nanna never trusted anyone with the location of where she and Gramps lived. The forest was no stranger to me, but it was to the others.
At this, I remembered Nila. It broke my heart not to tell her where I was going, but my family always lived their lives on invisiblity and secrecy. I tread on, never looking back. "I'll be back to kiss you anytime I want, sweetheart," I murmured, thinking about Nila.
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Nila
eventually I woke up. Luna was gone, and she had taken her blanket. Well. I stood up and walked out of the crack, brushing leaves off me. Most everyone was asleep, but the fire was still going. I sat down beside it, and warmed my hands. I stood up and walked past Arthur's lone tent. Considering knocking on the plastic and asking to talk to him because I was lonely, I almost did. Until I realized he wasn't there. Worried, I started walking around, looking in our spot, in the trees, behind the mosileims, and by the fire. My heart cold, I wandered back to our spot, curled up and cried myself to sleep, sure he had left me, like everyone else in my life.
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Zytren Syrosha
"It's nice to meet you," I said and i kissed her hand, "its nice to see your beautiful face after all this time of not seeing you at all. Do you remeber me after all this time of not being near each other?" She looked at me and smiled with her cheeks blushing "Yes i remember you, you were that thug on the streats that tripped and fell," she said laughing. "Of course thats what you remember," I replied sighing
"Life is a game of chess, except I control the what happens Next and slowly lose the ones that we're never there in the first place" ~Zytrianna




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Cataluna Zara
I smiled. "But I also remember your sweeter side your musical side, and your loving side." I replied smiling. "I remember you playing your guitar animals surrounding you with adoration and love in their eyes instead of fear." I said smiling and blushing at the same time.
"You are without a doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of."

"But you have heard of me."



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