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Lavvie
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Thu Apr 14, 2011 8:47 pm
Lavvie says... · Thu Apr 14, 2011 8:47 pm
I'd be more than pleased to review...

    General Fiction (short stories & novels)
    Fantasy Fiction (short stories & novels)
    Action/Adventure Fiction (short stories & novels)

Note: If you would like me to review novel excerpts, please do not link me to, say, the fifth chapter. I like it much better if i start out with the first chapter so I don't end up reviewing something I can't necessarily understand ;)

I don't mind reviewing...

    Historical Fiction (short stories)
    Non-Fiction
    *Romantic Fiction (short stories & novels)

*I only review romantic short stories/novels if I deem them appropriate. I don't like reading graphic sexual scenes.

I will review poetry but I'm not spectacular at it. I have an appreciation for poems, but I can't promise any stellar reviews in that area of creative writing. I'm open to reviewing all poetry genres specified in the forums.

Please keep in mind that I will refuse to do a review if:

    a) U rite ur storiz lik dis.
    b) your sentences are not capitalized or punctuated by a period
    c) It is in one big block of text. This can easily be fixed by using the enter button or selecting "Story" for Special Formatting.
    d) You're swamping the WRFF threads. Or carpeting, as Nate says.

I do acknowledge that sometimes people miss punctuation or misspell words. I just want to make it clear that if the problems are common, I'm not going to go through the whole thing and show you where everything is ;) I am always open to non-fiction such as general articles and essay editing.

Now. Request away!

PS. Here are my completed reviews so far (ones I've done due to this WRFF thread+some):
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Mon Apr 18, 2011 5:58 am
Lavvie says... · Mon Apr 18, 2011 5:58 am
Er...anyone? Greatly appreciated xD
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Cspr
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Wed Apr 20, 2011 3:49 pm
Cspr says... · Wed Apr 20, 2011 3:49 pm
*raises hand*

I have a fantasy novel that could use a review. It is sort of sword and sorcery mixed with magical realism and my own depressing honesty. It is written in third person POV, in second-draft-land, and spell-checked.

Here is a link to the first chapter, if you feel up to it: viewtopic.php?t=79599

Thanks for your time.
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Wed Apr 20, 2011 11:45 pm
Boolovesyou says... · Wed Apr 20, 2011 11:45 pm
Hey I have a story I'd appreciate if you could review. Its a little on the dark side though, and has some cussing. Just warning you.
Its called Wall of Perfect Pictures. Heres the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post850247.html#p850247
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Lavvie
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Thu Apr 21, 2011 6:55 am
Lavvie says... · Thu Apr 21, 2011 6:55 am
Done, Cspr! If you want more reviews for that novel or anything else, don't hesitate to post something again ;)

Lavvi
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Thu Apr 21, 2011 7:22 am
Lavvie says... · Thu Apr 21, 2011 7:22 am
Done, Boo. Hope you appreciate the review :)

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Fri Apr 22, 2011 12:43 am
xoCairo says... · Fri Apr 22, 2011 12:43 am
Well, I was really hoping to get a new lampshade. Now you've crushed me. :(

On the other hand, would you mind reviewing the prologue of my currently unnamed fantasy novel ( -click!-) ? I'd be grateful.

Thanks in advanced.




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Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:03 pm
Tenyo says... · Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:03 pm
Here's a link to 'Mummy's little bear-' which is a fantasy short story, if you happen to have some time free.

viewtopic.php?t=79682
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Sat Apr 23, 2011 5:43 am
Lavvie says... · Sat Apr 23, 2011 5:43 am
There Cairo! Done. I'll move on to Tenyo's now.

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Mickixoxo
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Sat Apr 23, 2011 6:46 pm
Mickixoxo says... · Sat Apr 23, 2011 6:46 pm
Uhm. Uhm. *raises hand* Hello!

Er... yeah... this is my first time requesting a review so I'm not really sure what to say. First I feel kind of desperate since I'm asking and I also feel sad cause I wanted a lampshade... :/
But anyway, could you please read my fantasy novel? :) It's called Mirror and so far I only have three chapters up but if you could read it and leave a review it would make me very happy! :)
novel.php?id=1212
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Lavvie
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Sun Apr 24, 2011 1:00 am
Lavvie says... · Sun Apr 24, 2011 1:00 am
Finished Tenyo's.
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Mon Apr 25, 2011 11:16 am
Lavvie says... · Mon Apr 25, 2011 11:16 am
Hey Micki,

For future reference, can you only link me to the prologue and/or first chapter like I specified in my guidelines? I'd appreciate it :) But I reviewed your prologue and if you want more for the rest of your novel, post away!
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Wed Apr 27, 2011 5:07 am
Jalmoc says... · Wed Apr 27, 2011 5:07 am
Hey Lavi. :D I was wondering if you wouldn't mind reviewing this? topic73400.html

People haven't really commented on it, and I'm kinda stumped on where to take it. If you could take a look, I'd really appreciate it. :D

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Fri Apr 29, 2011 3:26 am
Lavvie says... · Fri Apr 29, 2011 3:26 am
Done, Jalmoc.
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