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Done, Ctrl.

Any more?
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Reviews wanted! *hinthintnudgenudgewinkwink*
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Hai! Can I get a review on this please? Thanks! :D

If you like it, press like! :D
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Hey! Boo again! ( I hope you missed me.) I wrote two poems recently. They are both pretty short so they shouldn't take up a lot of time! If you could review them it would be great!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=80590
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=80591


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I'll get to those as soon as possible, Boo! Glad you came back.

Jas? I'm finding it rather challenging to review something so short and it already has loads of reviewed, making it doubly hard. I apologize, but I can't find much to say about it because already people have targeted most of the issues with Winterland. If you would like a different review by me, go right ahead :)
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Review would be greatly appreciated: topic80611.html

And I'd be happy to do one in return :) Just let me know by PM or on my wall or just attach it to the end of your comment.
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Hi Lavender,

If you decide you're okay with reviewing it, here's the link to the first chapter of my book! post859926.html#p859926

Thanks
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Hi all.

So I'm being rather slow on the reviews. The school week was extremely busy so I couldn't do much.

Boo- both your requested poems are finished.
LittlePrincess- I'll get to that right after I post this.
Sarebear- I'll try and do that review today if not tomorrow or next weekend.
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Done, LittlePrincess.
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Note to self: topic80968.html
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Please review my story....I think the link is in my signature...somewhere...

found IT!!
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I need some feedback Please :3
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Sorry for the wait, Sarebear, but your review is done.

beckiw's will be done soon.

Rite- I'll get to that after beckiw's. I'll review only the first chapter and you can have me review the others later if you insist.

Cammy- Hopefully today and if not, tomorrow :)

Sorry for the waits!
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Beaks-- done.

Ritehunter-- done.
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Bumping. I need to do some more reviews!
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